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bye bro! Naruto : I Cannot be Defeated (V4 Added)
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Hello everyone :) ..
i finaly finished this wall -.- .. i think O-O .. i started this wall more than a week ago but the holidays got me besy , and now i finally had time to work on it more!.
V1 - Dropped
V2 - Dropped
V3 - Active (back+hand Fix)
V4 - Active (wall & tail removed+sun reflaction+chakra color fix)
i started with the vector of naruto witch is taking from the new movie (4 screenshots to get the full naruto vector).. it was really small and i couldnt see most of the lines .. then i made the BG to fit the vector :D ..
overall this is a 100% made in Photoshop CS ..
ohh ya .. the vector is 3500 px long so if there is anything you Suggest i change .. fell free to say it ^_^ .
i finaly finished this wall -.- .. i think O-O .. i started this wall more than a week ago but the holidays got me besy , and now i finally had time to work on it more!.
V1 - Dropped
V2 - Dropped
V3 - Active (back+hand Fix)
V4 - Active (wall & tail removed+sun reflaction+chakra color fix)
i started with the vector of naruto witch is taking from the new movie (4 screenshots to get the full naruto vector).. it was really small and i couldnt see most of the lines .. then i made the BG to fit the vector :D ..
overall this is a 100% made in Photoshop CS ..
ohh ya .. the vector is 3500 px long so if there is anything you Suggest i change .. fell free to say it ^_^ .
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The colorting is all good but the way you use em dosen't really feel good the atmosphere on the image look really weird, but i think it woul rather look better in a dark bg and make naruto a lil darker
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This is definitely a nice start! I think this has potential for improvements so my comments are gonna be a bit long...^^"
The most glaring problem to me is the gray background. The dullness of that color just kills the energetic vibe of the wallpaper. You need to make it a color that stands out more...perhaps a brighter color. Try pressing Crtl+U while the background layer is selected and changing the Hue bar a bit to see which background color looks the best.
Also, you might want to change the stroke around Naruto to a redder color since it will make him stand out more (and will match his red eyes). Naruto's right hand lacks details, mainly his nails; right now, it just looks like a blob in the form of a hand. Then there's Kyuubi's tail...I don't remember it ever looking like that, but the way it looks at the moment reminds me of a chicken tail >_<
Anyway, good job so far and just work on it a bit and I'm sure it'll turn out even better ^^
The most glaring problem to me is the gray background. The dullness of that color just kills the energetic vibe of the wallpaper. You need to make it a color that stands out more...perhaps a brighter color. Try pressing Crtl+U while the background layer is selected and changing the Hue bar a bit to see which background color looks the best.
Also, you might want to change the stroke around Naruto to a redder color since it will make him stand out more (and will match his red eyes). Naruto's right hand lacks details, mainly his nails; right now, it just looks like a blob in the form of a hand. Then there's Kyuubi's tail...I don't remember it ever looking like that, but the way it looks at the moment reminds me of a chicken tail >_<
Anyway, good job so far and just work on it a bit and I'm sure it'll turn out even better ^^
Hi guys :) .. thanks for the feedback ..
i have colored the background with some blue rather than having the gray boring sky .. and i fixed his tail and removed the other layers of colors .. xD .
the tail was taking for Ep.134 if im not mistaking .. and i put it to make him look more angry :P .. if you think i should remove it .. please tell me ^^" .. or if you have anyway that whould make it better :) .
what do you guys think about everything on the background ? .. everything (100%) was made with the PenTool so feel free to comment on anything ^^ ..
PS . the left hand was going to be covered with chakra and thats why i didnt finish it :P .. but i will fix it and but the nails and fix the shape of the hand tomorow ^^ .
i have colored the background with some blue rather than having the gray boring sky .. and i fixed his tail and removed the other layers of colors .. xD .
the tail was taking for Ep.134 if im not mistaking .. and i put it to make him look more angry :P .. if you think i should remove it .. please tell me ^^" .. or if you have anyway that whould make it better :) .
what do you guys think about everything on the background ? .. everything (100%) was made with the PenTool so feel free to comment on anything ^^ ..
PS . the left hand was going to be covered with chakra and thats why i didnt finish it :P .. but i will fix it and but the nails and fix the shape of the hand tomorow ^^ .
I like V3 and the darker look it has , V2 look simple next to V3's background , maybe you can add tree's and more stuff over the cliff because it's laking the details that other parts has .
I changed the background and went with a darker look like BonEMasters Suggested ..
what do you guys think about it now ? ..
im thinking of removing all the lands in this wall .. and making the ocean bigger .. what do you think :) .. should i do that @.@ ?
or do you guys have other stuff that can make this wall better :) .
what do you guys think about it now ? ..
im thinking of removing all the lands in this wall .. and making the ocean bigger .. what do you think :) .. should i do that @.@ ?
or do you guys have other stuff that can make this wall better :) .
I suggest Remove all the wall, trees and maybe..........the fox tail ... 0_0 leave out more dark color than the orange... it will create contract...
sometimes full vector lack some ability to show out the motion and mood, maybe you can add some ps effect as well...
BTW, the water looks just great....
sometimes full vector lack some ability to show out the motion and mood, maybe you can add some ps effect as well...
BTW, the water looks just great....
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Ok .. thank for the feedback Delacour :) ..
i removed the wall and the bushs .. and added more water layers and made it reflacte with the sun ..
V4
and i removed the tail too xD .. lol .. i used the cloud filter .. to give the sky a better look and remove the flatness of colors in there ..
what do you guys think now ? ..
i removed the wall and the bushs .. and added more water layers and made it reflacte with the sun ..
V4
and i removed the tail too xD .. lol .. i used the cloud filter .. to give the sky a better look and remove the flatness of colors in there ..
what do you guys think now ? ..
Wow i think it's getting better and better!
Anyway, I mean some effect on the fire cause it looks kind wried now...only lower its opacity make it looks floating there...
the fire is most important element that show Naruto's anger in this wall...
Maybe try something like this?
Anyway, I mean some effect on the fire cause it looks kind wried now...only lower its opacity make it looks floating there...
the fire is most important element that show Naruto's anger in this wall...
Maybe try something like this?
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