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bye bro! WIP (Wallpaper In Progress)Fate Stay Night
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Ok actually I think its near completion, but I'd just like to hear what other people have to say about it.
I drew the background from serveral other pics. I kinda adjusted most of the coloring to fit the pastel colored theme. I was trying to get a nice warm effect.
http://img232.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fatestaynight8uz.jpg
Heres some stuff I thought about changing,
1. The texture of the font
2. There seems to be random lightning, I was trying to add more dramatic affect.
3. I'm fresh outta Idea's
Latest version
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5394/fatestaynight24dp.jpg
I drew the background from serveral other pics. I kinda adjusted most of the coloring to fit the pastel colored theme. I was trying to get a nice warm effect.
http://img232.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fatestaynight8uz.jpg
Heres some stuff I thought about changing,
1. The texture of the font
2. There seems to be random lightning, I was trying to add more dramatic affect.
3. I'm fresh outta Idea's
Latest version
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5394/fatestaynight24dp.jpg
I'm Bitting Joohz
The link does not work...
Link still aint working.
2 years 11 months ago
^^' ... hmm ... those "..." in the middle of the link
u copied the wrong andress ~ *u should have copy by the pic url .. x.x~ *
u copied the wrong andress ~ *u should have copy by the pic url .. x.x~ *
OMG I'm sorry fixed the link
http://img232.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fatestaynight8uz.jpg
http://img232.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fatestaynight8uz.jpg
I'm Bitting Joohz
Nice colours and lighting, but everything looks too heavily filtered. Which is a shame since otherwise it's a nice wall O_o;
Hmm too heavily filtered? Hmm i was trying to give the character and background more definition. Anyway I'll try a less sketchy version and we'll how it turns out.
I'm Bitting Joohz
Yea Yea I know its a dbl post but its about 5 days apart so it shudnt matter ( I hope ). Anyway did some touch up work and this is what came out.
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5394/fatestaynight24dp.jpg
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5394/fatestaynight24dp.jpg
I'm Bitting Joohz
The new version is much better, you have done a great job.
i saw down the wall somthing written, DIEN!
is it your name or what, because i think you must use your AP nick name, if you wanne upload it here..
i saw down the wall somthing written, DIEN!
is it your name or what, because i think you must use your AP nick name, if you wanne upload it here..
A life without a smile is a life without happiness, so smile when you can (/\_/\)
Excellent background. the only part i think doesnt flow well is the light streaks. They are a little oddly placed and rea a strange shade...i think if you wan them to stay that color you need something for them to relate to in the image.
2 years 11 months ago
Look better, but i have to agree with wht furikuu said in the first place, the background looks too damn heavily filtered!
mohanadthe new version is much better, you have done a great job.
i saw down the wall somthing written, DIEN!
is it your name or what, because i think you must use your AP nick name, if you wanne upload it here..
Dw about the "DIEN" its been on every single one of my walls and there hasnt been any problems yet
Hmm I dunnoe bout the background, it was origiannly 400x400 I busted lotsa time trying to retrace / enlarge and give it a distorted look as if it were wrecked. I'll try some stuff and see how that turn out.
I'm Bitting Joohz
The background is a bit too blurry and I don't too like the glow around the text.
I'd have to disagree with what the other people say about the background
its not the center of attention in this wall so i think the filters work well with it. and i have no idea how you went from the scan in the first link to the second, but that is freakin awesome.
anyways the wall is really good. The rocks near the front could have more definition since its like... in the front, but i really had to look for that one. The scan draws enough attention on its own. I guess the rocks near the sword are too close to towards the center to be blurred like that.
dont worry about the filters.. i mean.. having them or not is more like an artistic taste thing, so whatever you want would be fine
its not the center of attention in this wall so i think the filters work well with it. and i have no idea how you went from the scan in the first link to the second, but that is freakin awesome.
anyways the wall is really good. The rocks near the front could have more definition since its like... in the front, but i really had to look for that one. The scan draws enough attention on its own. I guess the rocks near the sword are too close to towards the center to be blurred like that.
dont worry about the filters.. i mean.. having them or not is more like an artistic taste thing, so whatever you want would be fine
2 years 11 months ago
I think it has good potential. One thing I might add is to de-saturate the lighting effects a bit (they seem a bit too neon), and maybe help their accuracy around contours with the smudge tool a bit (some of the patches look like globs of slime in the air). Good effort though! ^_^
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