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Fly... by °Phill 2 months 2 weeks ago

Fly... by °Phill 2 months 2 weeks ago

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This wallpaper captures the urban essence that proliferated the art of Ghost in the Shell in every incarnation of the series. Phill does an amazing job of capturing a moment of surrealism.

While there are a few, stray building angles and shadows, you find that your eye forgives the minor details and instead focuses on the overall scene that is larger than life, with lights trailing off into infinity.

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~Loudacryx 42 minutes ago
Wild pwnage appears! Pigsty I choose you!!1one

~Isolde 42 minutes ago
Walling good is a talent, its not entirely based on luck

~waynehead 48 minutes ago
Your Result is: You are Light Yagami (Kira)

~CaptainABS 48 minutes ago
I am shouting... in a box! Teehee, I feel so sexy! ^.^

~Dandoan 52 minutes ago
I should. And then when it gets smacked down, I can rub his nose in it

~Loudacryx 1 hour ago
Misunderstanding is the root of prejudice.. more like make him do walls and see if he can even have one accepted here..

^hatesyou 1 hour 3 minutes ago
Make him join and post for giggles.

~Dandoan 1 hour 5 minutes ago
Most pointless argument. My coworker thinks that these walls and VECTORING is just easy and takes no talent... -_-

~Roxas 1 hour 41 minutes ago
Um so you are not in your country?

~Isolde 2 hours 1 minute ago
Go to my country then xD

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Any advice on this new paper?

~oguh
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Xerxes
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2 years 8 months ago
User posted image



here's the URL for the bigger version aswell
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i'm wondering whether i should make it a bit more contrasted, maybe bring the colours out a bit more, i personally like the eyes because i managed to capture the right emotion in them... well... say what you think

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*Dimsim
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Lazy But Crazy
Topics: 14
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2 years 8 months ago
I guess the eyes look nice but the whole wall looks too plain. Maybe try to center the eyes to the mid or add in a 2nd band showing her body. Overall its pretty good.
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I'm Bitting Joohz

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~Yulaw
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2 years 8 months ago
Like Dimsim said, overall its pretty good but its just missing that little extra, I dont know if Text should be added to fix it up, but this 1 can turn out quite good.

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θtrismugistus
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Posts: 2889
2 years 8 months ago
Gif? Blimey. Looks very pixelated as most large gifs do - I'd save it as a jpeg for starters.

In terms of the composition I'd suggest looking up somethign called "rule of thirds". Use this and place the strip around one third of the way down the wall and have her eyes one third in from the edge. It will look much more balanced.