A sun,a cloud and a cat with a crying girl..
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You really did get everyone's attention by posting the link in the shout box.
i think i prefer the one without the cloud blocking the sun,
cause the angle is quite wrong. plus you can clean the character
alittle, but on the other hand i find everything ok.
i think i prefer the one without the cloud blocking the sun,
cause the angle is quite wrong. plus you can clean the character
alittle, but on the other hand i find everything ok.
Is the clouds ok??^^
Its a little plain...
add more designs and I prefer number 1...
goood luck
add more designs and I prefer number 1...
goood luck
1 year 11 months ago
I prefer numbre one ^_^
1 year 11 months ago
Well it seems I'm the only one to prefer the second one...
If you chose the first one, you have to correct the spot in the middle.
About the clouds, you should check the edges... About thoses clouds, you have two clouds the right bottom corner shouldn't let see the little blue spot. And the same for the upper one on the right ;)
You have artifacts problems around the sun.
The scans seems a bit grainy but it can be my screen...
It's a bit too plain for me... Can't you had some text or so to avoid the emptiness of the wall.
Hope it helps... Good luck! ;)
If you chose the first one, you have to correct the spot in the middle.
About the clouds, you should check the edges... About thoses clouds, you have two clouds the right bottom corner shouldn't let see the little blue spot. And the same for the upper one on the right ;)
You have artifacts problems around the sun.
The scans seems a bit grainy but it can be my screen...
It's a bit too plain for me... Can't you had some text or so to avoid the emptiness of the wall.
Hope it helps... Good luck! ;)
I think the first one is better too .. but you need to think about a way to make it more intersting ... maybe by adding more elementes like a cool text or a house roof or somthing to make more than just clouds and the sun ..
overall its a cute idea ^_^ .. take care .
overall its a cute idea ^_^ .. take care .
Hmm i'll just say that umm..
1. The reason things look so plain... because it is plain, and plain isn't necessarily bad.
2. The scan abit blurry.
These are the things i think your looking for in this kinda wall
1. If its goanan be plain you want a bold strong look
2. Just nice and childish
These are the things "I" think might help you improve your wall.
1. Outline everything in a nice bold black linning, makes things look more cartoony and nice.
2. Osaka seems a blurred, i'm not too sure, but i suggest clean up the scan. Or just outline it.
Notice the " on the I, this is because thats what "I" reckon will improve your paper. You or other people may not agree and thats all fine and dandy. Well anyway good luck!!
1. The reason things look so plain... because it is plain, and plain isn't necessarily bad.
2. The scan abit blurry.
These are the things i think your looking for in this kinda wall
1. If its goanan be plain you want a bold strong look
2. Just nice and childish
These are the things "I" think might help you improve your wall.
1. Outline everything in a nice bold black linning, makes things look more cartoony and nice.
2. Osaka seems a blurred, i'm not too sure, but i suggest clean up the scan. Or just outline it.
Notice the " on the I, this is because thats what "I" reckon will improve your paper. You or other people may not agree and thats all fine and dandy. Well anyway good luck!!
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