MY first wallpaper
It's with Niwa Daisuke from DN Angel. I just tried to do something with my program and that's it. It's the first wallpaper I've created... I wanted to put a text on it, but I didn't know what to write on ^^"
Well that's it. ^^
KLICK
Well that's it. ^^
KLICK
Hm... not bad, not bad at all, pretty good for your first wallpaper
the scan is a little too blurry, its hurting my eyes when i look at him
extraction is ok, but you might want to smoothen out the edges
the background could use something more to make it more interesting
as for text, maybe "Red Angel" and subtitle "Niwa Daisuke", nice work so far!
the scan is a little too blurry, its hurting my eyes when i look at him
extraction is ok, but you might want to smoothen out the edges
the background could use something more to make it more interesting
as for text, maybe "Red Angel" and subtitle "Niwa Daisuke", nice work so far!
WAY BLURRY. Try using smart sharpen. And for the title, I go with what shinsengumix or sumin sed.
Not really an expert... but the image is still blurry, you might try putting shadows, so it'll not look so flat...
And the faded text at the back is quite unreadable...nice color though ;D
And the faded text at the back is quite unreadable...nice color though ;D
2 years 7 months ago
Extraction and cleaning still need some work. i think i liked the original texture/pattern that was on him, this one just makes him look poor quality. ya, the text underneath him could be a tad smaller, same with the main text. i actually don't mind the faint text in the bg, not all text has to be read, it can be decorative.
it's a neat bg, maybe another texture or two to give it more depth and design? not sure if it would look alright. lastly, don't forget a sig ;P
good luck! :)
it's a neat bg, maybe another texture or two to give it more depth and design? not sure if it would look alright. lastly, don't forget a sig ;P
good luck! :)
2 years 7 months ago
You should put the words "Red Angel" higher and put his name in a different place, because it looks as if you decided to put it in at the last second. The sharpness and...darkness? Lightness? I forgot the word for it, but both of the texts don't fit the wall very well because of it. The very top looks kind of empty, maybe put the faded text a little higher, and less faded so it doesn't look random? And don't forget a signature, otherwise it will be rejected immediately.
#304274 Quote Report Edited by ~LittleKitty 2 years 7 months ago
Sharpening makes the outlines jagged, and the quality bad.
DON"T do It! XP
red angel is a bit too big.
i don't suggest placing a text under him either.
try to not have ANy effects on him.
but don't have it blurred either.
faint text in the back is really hard to read, if you wanted it to be like that, then it needs to blend in better. the font doesn't fit the other fonts on there..
extraction could use some work too
C: nice start! good luck~
DON"T do It! XP
red angel is a bit too big.
i don't suggest placing a text under him either.
try to not have ANy effects on him.
but don't have it blurred either.
faint text in the back is really hard to read, if you wanted it to be like that, then it needs to blend in better. the font doesn't fit the other fonts on there..
extraction could use some work too
C: nice start! good luck~
Yes how long does it usually take 4 the category resquest to proccess? and how do i get a pic next 2 my name ? I'm totally clueless can you guys help me out Please?
PinkPixieyes how long does it usually take 4 the category resquest to proccess?
24 Hours or less, or else, it's probably not approved.
PinkPixiehow do i get a pic next 2 my name ? I'm totally clueless can you guys help me out Please?
An Avatar? o.O, like my Luffy? you already have one.
Hm... you seem to be going with the "red angel" idea but what i meant for the subtitle "niwa daisuke" is to have it right under "red angel"
also, if you plan on using that kinda of font, i suggest having the font in the background the same as well because it doesn't really look good when the text is random, try putting the text at the center of that red strip
the scan is still pretty blurry, the only solution i have is to vector it, keep up the good work!
also, if you plan on using that kinda of font, i suggest having the font in the background the same as well because it doesn't really look good when the text is random, try putting the text at the center of that red strip
the scan is still pretty blurry, the only solution i have is to vector it, keep up the good work!
Extraction needs work as there are corners unextracted.
shadow under text ...no good^^;
too many different font styles...in the bg especially, not ver nice
get rid of the effect on the text because it makes it messier and is just too much a bit
clean daisuke a bit, because his colors are a bit dull
shadow under text ...no good^^;
too many different font styles...in the bg especially, not ver nice
get rid of the effect on the text because it makes it messier and is just too much a bit
clean daisuke a bit, because his colors are a bit dull
Text behind him





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