Roy Mustang wall
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2 years 4 months ago
Well, this will be my second wall here at AP, but I want know your opinions about it ^_____^
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f223/iiKrisii/WallRoy.jpg
Thanks for your comments! n.n
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f223/iiKrisii/WallRoy.jpg
Thanks for your comments! n.n
Wow, that's absolutely gorgeous. There really isn't much I can criticise it on, but I'll give it my best shot =P:
- Nice use of grunge, but the beige shapes are too clean for the rest of the wallpaper. I'd say use the eraser tool with the grunge brushes to give it a more dirty look.
- Lighting is probably a bit off. It seems to be a dark wallpaper, but the character is too bright to fit in with the rest of the background. Try making a light point and shade the character according to that point.
- I'm not sure that the shape at the bottom of the wallpaper is necessary. It looks isolated compared to the other shapes
- Your sig needs to fit under the start menu in Windows. It's slightly above this point at the moment
Other than that, it's superb, especially for a second attempt at wallpapers. You really have a natural talent for this kinda thing. Well done, ganbatte!
- Nice use of grunge, but the beige shapes are too clean for the rest of the wallpaper. I'd say use the eraser tool with the grunge brushes to give it a more dirty look.
- Lighting is probably a bit off. It seems to be a dark wallpaper, but the character is too bright to fit in with the rest of the background. Try making a light point and shade the character according to that point.
- I'm not sure that the shape at the bottom of the wallpaper is necessary. It looks isolated compared to the other shapes
- Your sig needs to fit under the start menu in Windows. It's slightly above this point at the moment
Other than that, it's superb, especially for a second attempt at wallpapers. You really have a natural talent for this kinda thing. Well done, ganbatte!
Agrees with Umboody, it is gorgeous ^^
Yep the lighting is off, the light source should be the brightest, and the lowest part should be the darkest.
Suggestion:
Add one distinctive color.
Great job^^
Yep the lighting is off, the light source should be the brightest, and the lowest part should be the darkest.
Suggestion:
Add one distinctive color.
Great job^^
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bye bro! 

