I apologize if this shouldn't be here (i wasn't sure of whether i should post it here or in the non-anime related wallpapers forum^^;;, please move this if you need to^^)

Anyway, yes i'm back with another wall.
This one features Jack and Ridley from Radiata Stories, the original scan was from Forgotten Memories
some notes for your reference =):

-yes the tree is in the middle of a field^^; (that's how it was intended because my background is based off scenary from the actual game)
-right now the thing that really bugs me is my sky, i have no idea what to do with it T-T(it's very...bleh)
-title, i'm not really sure, i might change it(i honestly didn't know what to put as the title) suggestions for a beter title would be nice^^
-font choice, again, not very sure(simple or fancier? what do you guys think?)
-grass maybe too dark? O_o;;;;

comments please and thanks^^

Alright, there are only a few things I can see wrong with this wall. The sky isn't so much a problem as the grass is. There is a stark contrast with the grass that makes it a bit too "bright" and it draws my eyes to it as a focal point as opposed to the characters.

Secondly, the sky. There is that ONE dark cloud there that draws the eyes too it and makes it look like you are trying to draw the eyes to it when viewing the sky. If that was what you were going for, then well done, but I somehow don't think that that was the desired effect.

Very good! The combination it's very pretty!

Mimette - i'll definitely work on the grass (and i agree with you there, haha, originally i did want to kinda fix it so that it wasn't so bold, but it just ended up that say O_o;;; i'll work on it though^^)
the sky..mm...well..as of right now, when you look at it, the focal point would be the cloud. mostly because i didn't have a clue about what to put in the sky besides clouds x_x;; i didn't want to put too many though because i didn't want to make it look crowded there xD

thanks for the comments and suggestions (please do comment if you have any^^)

My suggestion would be to make the horizon less blurry. it looks somewhat strange this way.