Haven't been drawing lately since I don't have that much time anymore but I still have time to write poems. These poems aren't great but tell me what ya think. If you don't get a certain poem, I can explain it for you.<b>It</b>As poisonous as a snake?s venomOne drop of it is deadlyLike acid dropping on thin fleshIt burns through the body and soulLeaving the victim torn and emptyIt takes what remains of usAnd burns it without sympathyEvery one of us has seenThe traces of its unmerciful attackAs it leaves us confused in a labyrinthWithout the strength to turn back.- April 06, 2005 -<b>The Last of Everything</b>This will be the last tearfalling miserably down my face,And this wretched pain will be the laston this once broken body,The last pieces of my pathetic heartcradling silently in my hands,These unrequited feelings will sinkdreadfully down in quicksand,These repeating words I won't forget,No, I won't forget them at all,For this is the last, last timeI'll ever allow myself to fall.- April 06, 2005 -<b>A World without Love</b>Grasses and trees shriveling up dryLike the flowing sands of the Sahara DesertWars raid the green valleys day and nightAs the rivers and seas are dyed in a crimson redThe sun no longer shines its beautiful raysIts surface polluted by the acids of <i>their</i> civilizationSkies weeping for <i>their</i> sinful acts in vainBut their tears will never reach the lost generationKindness disappeared in <i>their</i> once pure heartsReplaced by the impure feelings of jealousy and hateDrowning in a sea of broken promises and deceit<i>They</i>, as a race of humans, will soon suffocateAs <i>they</i> walk aimlessly, <i>their</i> hearts empty<i>Their</i> lives are like the broken wings on a dying doveSalvation is but an unreachable dreamIn a world without any speck of love.- April 08, 2005 -

I really like 'the last of everything' I suppose alot of people can relate to that emotion.

I agree with evol the second one is nice...like evol told me onceunrequited love is the story of everybody XD

Well, i also like the second one...<!--emo&:)--><img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->the feeling may occurs in most of us sometimes, i guess.anyway, i also like the 3rd one...it really relect the world with war and stuff now...great job, don't think i can write something like that yet..<!--emo&:)--><img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Thanks for the comments everybody! Anybody figured out what "it" is in the first poem? <!--emo&^_^--><img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='happy.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Well, pink-sakura, i guess that 'it' is kindda invole with relationship/feeling kindda thing...i guess i may be wrong..<!--emo&:(--><img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->just a wild guess..i can only understand the meaning of the word, not the meaning inside the poem...<!--emo&:)--><img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->hope you can tell me...lol

Iam going to say the same thing reesha say as "it" being some type of relationship break upor something, but really iam as cluelessas reesha <!--emo&:ph34r:--><img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/ph34r.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='ph34r.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Lovley...I'll take a stab and say that "it" is supposed to be love, or the promise of love, or love withheld...something to that nature...

Kirjavaa got the answer right, but Reesha and DarkMattku was very close. "It" is the feeling of love. Really appreciate the feedback. Thanks everyone. <!--emo&^_^--><img src='style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='happy.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Guess i was too late but i was going to say "It" is - pain- then again thats just a specific feeling of love. great poetry there sakura. i would ask if you were a romantic at heart - but its hard to tell, again beautiful poetry.