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Walking in the desert...
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Yo... The last time I created a post here, it was for a simple colored drawing. There were a lot of errors (shadows, proportions, too classic...). I don't like when one of my characters is not good so I redraw and customize this chara.
In the new, I imagined her walking in the desert with a lot of wind (but I didn't do the background yet).
I had tried to do chinese clothes (yes, chinese clothes in the desert, this is strange) so for the pattern, i pick an image from my PC (maybe I will redo her clothes).
so, here is the remake girl. ^^
In the new, I imagined her walking in the desert with a lot of wind (but I didn't do the background yet).
I had tried to do chinese clothes (yes, chinese clothes in the desert, this is strange) so for the pattern, i pick an image from my PC (maybe I will redo her clothes).
so, here is the remake girl. ^^
I don't know if I should comment, you did kill Hoang after all. :ban: :P
Seriously though, the two drawings look great! Her dress does look a bit odd though, like it doesn't look enough like fabric and hugging her body? I hope I described it well enough. But it is a wonderful improvement over the first. :thumbsup:
Seriously though, the two drawings look great! Her dress does look a bit odd though, like it doesn't look enough like fabric and hugging her body? I hope I described it well enough. But it is a wonderful improvement over the first. :thumbsup:
Pasting the image right onto the dress looks very odd and unnatural, I think coming up with a more original approach would be better. other than that you've done a decent job with the lineart, nice work.
Nice drawing. Pasting the image on her dress looks cool.
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You did a good job drawing and coloring the girl. The image that is on the dress may look cool but it makes the dress appears flat. That is the only critique I have for this drawing. Other than that, good work.
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I cant say its awsome... but i cant say it sux...conidering to what you can draw this is Art... i persenally dont draw...i emberess myself with what i do....i think that what you did is cool ^^ akthought it needs a little more "Sharping"
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Thank you for your comments. I knew I had forgotten something but I didn't know what... the shadows on her dress...
Now I have just to add some shadows and then I will attack the background .(^v^)°
Now I have just to add some shadows and then I will attack the background .(^v^)°
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