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bye bro! Current Work in Progress
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Here's a pic of an original character, named Amelie. Still in preliminary sketches. Those are flowers in the bg. Please C&C.
Lineart:
Lineart:
Everything seems good except the leg... that's a slit dress right? if not, my mistake... i take back what i said about the leg..
i'm not too keen on the eyes though... though maybe it might work though..
is this going to be a colored piece?
i'm not too keen on the eyes though... though maybe it might work though..
is this going to be a colored piece?
#68297 Quote Report Edited by `shiroikaze 3 years 5 months ago
"simplistic"
For a rough, it's alright. i'd like to reserve any real comments until i see more work done to it.
while you're in this stage however, i'd like to inquire about whether those breasts are intentionally angular (stylized?)
while you're in this stage however, i'd like to inquire about whether those breasts are intentionally angular (stylized?)
Shiroikaze:
That is not a slit dress. ^^; The bit poking out is her right sleeve. Perhaps it will be clearer after I've colored it.
zeek:
I can see that there is something wrong with her breasts. I will correct it. (watch here for updates)
That is not a slit dress. ^^; The bit poking out is her right sleeve. Perhaps it will be clearer after I've colored it.
zeek:
I can see that there is something wrong with her breasts. I will correct it. (watch here for updates)
Minor proportion issues but I dig your linework. very loose and expressive, I like the feel of the sketch. nice job!
I've updated the first post. Hopefully the breasts look different now. XDDD
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