size:: 1600*1200
name:: iStrike Freedom
issue::
- well is my precious gunpla from gundam seed destiny [Strike Freedom Gundam:: Full burst mode] here is the original pic

- and then the iPOD theme came from another wall with ipod style so i've passion to do it with my SF gundam too
- after take picture i use photoshop to digitized it into graphic
- and here are the previous version of this

some kind of suck...
and then the other one

it was my first time at all and my photoshop skill are little bit suck...


any suggustion will be great for my to improve skill, thanks you for feedback.




update

i use Smudge tool in photoshop, that should do anythings?

It's very nice for your first wallpaper, and nice idea too that gundam also listening the music and take a dark theme for that because it's very cool for me. but, maybe it's just for me that i hardly see in your wallpaper that gundam is strike freedom.

Very jagged edges.

Try using the pen tool, it won't give you bad edges. You can find plenty of tutorials on DA and on the net.

The edges of everything are very jaggedy... do you have "anti-alias" checked when you use text/pen tool/etc.?
I'd also make the text a bit smaller, because it just seems kinda obtrusive the way it is.