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Kingdom Hearts
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1 year 7 months ago
This is definitely NOT a wall...
A wall is a piece of art that has the size of your SCREEN! The smallest walls accepted on AP are at least : 1024*768 pixels...
Also you need to know that it's not a manipulation picture we ask you to do... But you also need to work on composition, colors, fonts and colors of those fonts...
Here it's just a random picture resized wrong with no purpose at all...
Sorry to be hard on you but you really need to watch some walls before submitting a wallpaper on AP and much more if it's that kind...
You NEED to read the AP guide... Just a there on the right part of the site...
A wall is a piece of art that has the size of your SCREEN! The smallest walls accepted on AP are at least : 1024*768 pixels...
Also you need to know that it's not a manipulation picture we ask you to do... But you also need to work on composition, colors, fonts and colors of those fonts...
Here it's just a random picture resized wrong with no purpose at all...
Sorry to be hard on you but you really need to watch some walls before submitting a wallpaper on AP and much more if it's that kind...
You NEED to read the AP guide... Just a there on the right part of the site...
I come here in peace...
Or not...
:D
Well where can I start?
Forst off, I know you uploaded to imageshack, but the wallpaper needs to be atleast 1024x768 in size, which at the moment it doesn't appear to be.
In a strange way I kinda already like what you have done. The "inverted" colours look quite cool and I like the white outline thing that you have going on.
If you want to make this into a wallpaper to upload onto AP though the first thing I suggest is making it at least 1024x768. Then I think you need to definatly work on the text. At the moment it doesn't really fit in too well. The saying itself is really good, but the font lets it down quite alot. I would suggest checking out dafont.com if you are looking for something free and more original.
My second suggestion is that you make the bg more interesting. The dots are good but not really enough to draw you eye across the screen and the Lens flare is too much of a feature, and takes your eye off of Sora. If you are trying to make some thing fit with the sketchy style that you already have then maybe putting images in of Riku and/or Kairi in the same style. Or maybe even try to incorperate some crazy pattern in there. At the moment it's just a tad too plain.
Also another thing which is quite obvious from what you have uploaded is that Sora is streched quite alot. If you tried to upload this as a wallpaper on AP I'm pretty sure this would be one of the things that your wallpaper would be rejected for. If you are resizing an image you need to make sure that you keep it in proportion. If you are using photoshop then crtl + t and shift will keep the image in porportion while you are trying to resize it.
I'm not really sure what else to suggest but for some reason I like what you have so far and I feel you should work on that inverted kind of feel. Maybe it's because it feels more manga like...
Good luck and I hope that my advice helps in some way ^^
Forst off, I know you uploaded to imageshack, but the wallpaper needs to be atleast 1024x768 in size, which at the moment it doesn't appear to be.
In a strange way I kinda already like what you have done. The "inverted" colours look quite cool and I like the white outline thing that you have going on.
If you want to make this into a wallpaper to upload onto AP though the first thing I suggest is making it at least 1024x768. Then I think you need to definatly work on the text. At the moment it doesn't really fit in too well. The saying itself is really good, but the font lets it down quite alot. I would suggest checking out dafont.com if you are looking for something free and more original.
My second suggestion is that you make the bg more interesting. The dots are good but not really enough to draw you eye across the screen and the Lens flare is too much of a feature, and takes your eye off of Sora. If you are trying to make some thing fit with the sketchy style that you already have then maybe putting images in of Riku and/or Kairi in the same style. Or maybe even try to incorperate some crazy pattern in there. At the moment it's just a tad too plain.
Also another thing which is quite obvious from what you have uploaded is that Sora is streched quite alot. If you tried to upload this as a wallpaper on AP I'm pretty sure this would be one of the things that your wallpaper would be rejected for. If you are resizing an image you need to make sure that you keep it in proportion. If you are using photoshop then crtl + t and shift will keep the image in porportion while you are trying to resize it.
I'm not really sure what else to suggest but for some reason I like what you have so far and I feel you should work on that inverted kind of feel. Maybe it's because it feels more manga like...
Good luck and I hope that my advice helps in some way ^^
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