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Second try-Neon Genesis Evangelion
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i dont have a really good photoshop but im wondering what i should fix
A bit too dull, I think. She looks almost... well.. see through, it seems to me. Kinda weird. Might be the effect you were trying to give to us, if so, Good job ^_^ But, yeah, I think you might want ot brighten it up, just a bit.
I made it dull cause if i had her bright she would stand out to much but ill try it any ways ^_^ thanks for the advise
Well, yeah, I realise that. And that goes quite well with Rei... But thats just a bit too dark, I think.
I know it might look kind dark so im going to try it your way after i find my picture
how about now does it look ok
Ah, better. Now... Umm... I can't see anything to change, so wait for another, better waller to comment ^_^
I like much the second !
But.. ermm.. don't like the text, maybe it could be uppersized and why don't using golowing effect to make the edge softer.
Maybe you should work on the backgournd too, it seem to realistic.. not wallpaperistic !
I've seen ~omfgman giving a tiny tuto here for another guy which got the same effect on his wall ;)
(sorry for my english, hope you understand me..)
But.. ermm.. don't like the text, maybe it could be uppersized and why don't using golowing effect to make the edge softer.
Maybe you should work on the backgournd too, it seem to realistic.. not wallpaperistic !
I've seen ~omfgman giving a tiny tuto here for another guy which got the same effect on his wall ;)
(sorry for my english, hope you understand me..)
do you think this looks better i vector the buildings
heres another one with different font style
Ok here is what i can see should be better:
1- The scan is not clean at all, you have just used median noice over it and made it look lke this; and belive me it's not that good...
2- the bg is too real, you have here too just used a filter over the whole bg, and the filter is: cutout..
3- what kind of stars is that, it's many of them and they don't look good.
4- stop using the levels, you have made the whole wall look very gray
i hope you don't mis understandig me, because all i'm trying to do is to help you :)
1- The scan is not clean at all, you have just used median noice over it and made it look lke this; and belive me it's not that good...
2- the bg is too real, you have here too just used a filter over the whole bg, and the filter is: cutout..
3- what kind of stars is that, it's many of them and they don't look good.
4- stop using the levels, you have made the whole wall look very gray
i hope you don't mis understandig me, because all i'm trying to do is to help you :)
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