Tsubasa Chronicle - Sakura Wall - Vector
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This time i will finish this wall... after showing like a few on Session Zero then never seen again... so this will be completed...
the design is basically what it is atm but changes im gonna do are like well...
the black outlines are just for show.. its just gonna have shading...
the background would eventually get vectored.. and the pedals around sakura would be vectored too...
the feathers are just an extra atm.. it wont be on the final wall...
so yeh... comments and suggestions would be nice...
I like it! Do you like tsubasa chronicle too? I like the feathers best, how do you make it?
Traced a few feathers and used them as brushes...it was my first custom brushes and it turned out ok... but i don't think ill leave it there when the wall finishes because as you can possibly see that sakura is holding flowers so yeh... suppose to be flower pedals
Green and blue!I like these colours!And you really make a good vector on sakura !
Anyway I think you shul add more element on the background such as adding clouds in the sky or tress on the landscape… mmh no!finally : just add clouds I don't think it would be easy to add trees ^^
And I don't like your sky why didn't you make a linear gradient ?…
Anyway I love the composition and how d'you add the elements on your wall!keep working at it, I'm sure it will be a very nice wall !
good luck
Anyway I think you shul add more element on the background such as adding clouds in the sky or tress on the landscape… mmh no!finally : just add clouds I don't think it would be easy to add trees ^^
And I don't like your sky why didn't you make a linear gradient ?…
Anyway I love the composition and how d'you add the elements on your wall!keep working at it, I'm sure it will be a very nice wall !
good luck
Thanks AFA, good luck wiht your wallpaper!
Hhhmmm,..you still need a little practiced in vectoring but antways it's good now...I'm just a little bother the way you vector especially on the hair also there are some areas that are not filled well...or I think you did that on purpose buy anyways...nice concept there...I love it...well...why not adding birds there...you can also vector the bords so that they will all be coordinated...then...add also some text there..something like more romantic and a little fancy...well...I htink this all I can say...soo good luck on that wall...I hope this one helps you a little..just kee in touch with that wall..GOOD LUCK!
Pretty good. the thing that bothers me is the hair. the outline... i don't quite like the points on some of the hair strands at the back of her head and the the outline of the two curls on top of her head... i know this isn't the ordinary outline everything style, but the un-curved-ness of the hair there on top of her head doesn't look that great...=/ gl
Wow I'm digging that vector~
I like everything...I don't think there's anything I'd want to change about it. I think your signature might be a bit too large (it'd go over the toolbar) but I think that's it.
good luck!
I like everything...I don't think there's anything I'd want to change about it. I think your signature might be a bit too large (it'd go over the toolbar) but I think that's it.
good luck!
It looks pretty good, but you do want to fix the outlines on her hair. They're very blocky and not curvy.
Good luck!
Good luck!
Wow... I have to say that that vector is just fantastic. I think it looks very pretty xD
Thx for da comments.. well hopefully it'd be finish in the next 4 days, along side personal life and junk :P
remember that this was just like a little teaser so yeh... the some outlines looked bad on purpose so yeh.. just wait :D
yeh ill vector the background too.. like the clouds and fields(might be full of flowers too) but for the this preview i just "Cutout" some stock pics so yeh... it'll be good i hope :)
remember that this was just like a little teaser so yeh... the some outlines looked bad on purpose so yeh.. just wait :D
yeh ill vector the background too.. like the clouds and fields(might be full of flowers too) but for the this preview i just "Cutout" some stock pics so yeh... it'll be good i hope :)
Nice vector, but I don't dig the backroung texture though. Like always, Good Luck!
2 years 3 months ago
Very nice vector, but the texture takes away the vibe of the wall. And you should add more colors, such as yellow.
Not bad at all :3 the only thing i don't like is the added texture on the wall (imo, it would look nicer without it :3) some parts of Sakura's hair also seem rough on the edges rather than smooth, but other than that nice job :3
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