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*cry* PLEASE can u just TELL ME why ...
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PLeeeeeeeeeeeesae Help u_u *sob*
My wallpaper has been rejected !!
Tell me Why ?!
Here's :
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f114/cybil2006/Staring-at-you-wallpaper2-1.jpg
My wallpaper has been rejected !!
Tell me Why ?!
Here's :
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f114/cybil2006/Staring-at-you-wallpaper2-1.jpg
The scan looks low quality it needs fixing, and the moon doesnt mix into the BG that well
Some photo!
I made the Bg ... And i cut the scan
And i put the clouds i put the moon the stars eveything! ... AHHHHHHHH ...My back hurting me and you just said that in easy!!
I made the Bg ... And i cut the scan
And i put the clouds i put the moon the stars eveything! ... AHHHHHHHH ...My back hurting me and you just said that in easy!!
Wow it's soo great !! I don't see a reason to rejected this wallpaper ?!
You've done an good job on it ... I actully LOVE it ^-^
Mods , There's no need to reject this wallpaper .
You've done an good job on it ... I actully LOVE it ^-^
Mods , There's no need to reject this wallpaper .
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1 year 8 months ago
The character looks kinda pasted on the made bf, hmmmm perhaps some better blending in. I do really like the idea of this wallpaper. I also like the font choice for staring at you.
HuarruThe character looks kinda pasted on the made bf, hmmmm perhaps some better blending in. I do really like the idea of this wallpaper. I also like the font choice for staring at you.
Tell them , PLease u_u
From a physics standpoint I wouldn't expect stars to appear as congested around the moon as you've placed them.
From a technical standpoint the scan is somewhat lacking in crispness.
From an artistic standpoint I'm not seeing much interplay between the foreground and background which tends to make the composition flat. Placement of the scan is also a little questionable in this regard as a centralised composition such as this doesn't hold the eye as long as a asymmetrical one. The lighting affecting the scan also reminds me of a sunlight like source rather than a night scene.
That all said the only reason I'd personally be hesitant in accepting it at present is the scan clarity.
From a technical standpoint the scan is somewhat lacking in crispness.
From an artistic standpoint I'm not seeing much interplay between the foreground and background which tends to make the composition flat. Placement of the scan is also a little questionable in this regard as a centralised composition such as this doesn't hold the eye as long as a asymmetrical one. The lighting affecting the scan also reminds me of a sunlight like source rather than a night scene.
That all said the only reason I'd personally be hesitant in accepting it at present is the scan clarity.
Try making the clouds more notisable I assume you lowered theyre opacity what I would do is use black clouds and also dark gray tones of clouds kinda like I did in this wall
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallpapers/Paranoia-Agent/item45296/
and so put some clouds over the moon so it would blend in better into the BG
but the first thing you need to do is fix the scan
http://www.animepaper.net/gallery/wallpapers/Paranoia-Agent/item45296/
and so put some clouds over the moon so it would blend in better into the BG
but the first thing you need to do is fix the scan
Hmmm nice idea and good concept and needs indd some tweaking.
I would advice like sharpening up the scan ore increasing the quality of it. The extraction looks nice and i hope it stays then that way
The moon is like nice and freakin huge and doesnt need much changement, maybe a bit lighter, but then you would also need to increase the shadows on char/buildings.
for the foreground scenery why not maybe add a few rooftops/towers/mideavel architecture stuff to give it the idea that she is standing at the highest point of a city with the moon behind her.
Good luck ^^
'Beckor
I would advice like sharpening up the scan ore increasing the quality of it. The extraction looks nice and i hope it stays then that way
The moon is like nice and freakin huge and doesnt need much changement, maybe a bit lighter, but then you would also need to increase the shadows on char/buildings.
for the foreground scenery why not maybe add a few rooftops/towers/mideavel architecture stuff to give it the idea that she is standing at the highest point of a city with the moon behind her.
Good luck ^^
'Beckor
I changed everything and ... REJECTED u_u"
Here's the new one :
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f114/cybil2006/string-at-you.jpg
Here's the new one :
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f114/cybil2006/string-at-you.jpg
I would try putting the stars behind the clouds. As it is, your eyes (or mine at least) have trouble focusing on the clouds because of this. Also the bats are a bit strange looking in comparison to the rest of the background. Maybe try deleting them all together?
Otherwise I really like it, I think it could be very close to being accepted. Good work :)
Otherwise I really like it, I think it could be very close to being accepted. Good work :)
Well you know you can always ask the person who rejected it why they did right? hehe.
I think that it dosent flow well together for some reason. Personally I dont like the moon you chose that well it looks like stock photo to me. The Clouds are too transparent, I think it would look neat with a heavy large array of clouds opposed to a few big transparent ones. Besides since when do you see invisible clouds? hehe. I love the text you used by the way. The ground looks TOO crsp of an edge to me compared to the other edges in the wallpaper. AH I think I figured out why it dosent flow well with the eye...lighting. Simply, the lighting is off. Where does the blue ray of light come from on the bottom side of the character? also the ground needs light. I would suggest making the whole image more on the blue side (to represent the cold night feeling). That would also make the moons illumination stand out more. lol im tired and probly dont make sense so if you need more help feel free to message me.
Gj & GL
~Slaka
I think that it dosent flow well together for some reason. Personally I dont like the moon you chose that well it looks like stock photo to me. The Clouds are too transparent, I think it would look neat with a heavy large array of clouds opposed to a few big transparent ones. Besides since when do you see invisible clouds? hehe. I love the text you used by the way. The ground looks TOO crsp of an edge to me compared to the other edges in the wallpaper. AH I think I figured out why it dosent flow well with the eye...lighting. Simply, the lighting is off. Where does the blue ray of light come from on the bottom side of the character? also the ground needs light. I would suggest making the whole image more on the blue side (to represent the cold night feeling). That would also make the moons illumination stand out more. lol im tired and probly dont make sense so if you need more help feel free to message me.
Gj & GL
~Slaka
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