First Wall - Need Feedback.! (REDONE)
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^ ^ ^ Ive redone it...How can I make it bettter. ? Is there anything wrong with it. ?
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1 year 8 months ago
Well i am guessing you drawn the character yourself, try vectoring the line art and then colour the image. Probally will look a lot smoother then it looks currently. Good luck with the vectoring :)
I think the character is need more improvement.
The background is also need more atmosphere
BTW, it is original character or not ?
The background is also need more atmosphere
BTW, it is original character or not ?
Umm... i don't know if you drew the character yourself but... extraction of character is bad... i can cleary see the white line over the character... and also hair of this character is cutted off...
and... well... i guess you could put more effort on background
btw lets use imageshack... if you didn't made it 800 X 600 from the start photobucket resized the image again
and... well... i guess you could put more effort on background
btw lets use imageshack... if you didn't made it 800 X 600 from the start photobucket resized the image again
The character is original, I know the hair is cut off, I did that by mistake, I was going to fix it when I know how to improve it aswell. but thanks for the comments and I will do my best to make it better =)
First of all, I would make the wallpaper a little bigger. At least 1024x768? Not that many people have such small desktops from what I know.
Did you draw the character yourself? Well, first of all, it needs to be extracted a little better. Do you still see the whlie lines around the character? The colouring and lines are also a little scratchy to me, and it just looks a little chunky and big. The eyes' colouring is a bit weird as well. I would suggest vectoring the whole thing.
The background looks like it has no idea right now. It just looks like a bunch of splatters. I don't have any suggestions for the background, but just keep working on it. More effects, more of an idea? Much luck with it.
Did you draw the character yourself? Well, first of all, it needs to be extracted a little better. Do you still see the whlie lines around the character? The colouring and lines are also a little scratchy to me, and it just looks a little chunky and big. The eyes' colouring is a bit weird as well. I would suggest vectoring the whole thing.
The background looks like it has no idea right now. It just looks like a bunch of splatters. I don't have any suggestions for the background, but just keep working on it. More effects, more of an idea? Much luck with it.
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