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1 year 5 months ago
1 year 5 months ago
I think it's lovely!
However, there are some things which you may need to improve on.
1.) The words "Orange Sky" is barely legible against the similarly-colored sky. You should choose a different color -- I suggest orange or red of much darker color. Try experimenting with opacity and layer styles.
2.) The grass isn't convincing enough. You should make it look denser.
3.) The girl and the fence isn't shaded. And the fence looks too realistic compared to the girl.
4.) The color of the sky is too garish for my eyes. I think it'd look good if it were darker, and with various colors (as in sunset)
I guess that's all I want to say.
However, there are some things which you may need to improve on.
1.) The words "Orange Sky" is barely legible against the similarly-colored sky. You should choose a different color -- I suggest orange or red of much darker color. Try experimenting with opacity and layer styles.
2.) The grass isn't convincing enough. You should make it look denser.
3.) The girl and the fence isn't shaded. And the fence looks too realistic compared to the girl.
4.) The color of the sky is too garish for my eyes. I think it'd look good if it were darker, and with various colors (as in sunset)
I guess that's all I want to say.
1 year 5 months ago
I like the orange xD
Anywho, to add on what phoenixkenny said, some of the falling leaves are a little transparent against the fence, and they should be more opaque. Also, try adding a few clouds in the sky and see if it looks better or worse (experimenting is always good).
Good luck with the rest =)
Anywho, to add on what phoenixkenny said, some of the falling leaves are a little transparent against the fence, and they should be more opaque. Also, try adding a few clouds in the sky and see if it looks better or worse (experimenting is always good).
Good luck with the rest =)
1 year 5 months ago
I cant' get to put shadow on the fence..how can i do that? i'm new at this and i don't know all the commands:) thx
1 year 5 months ago
Good use of colours :) it matches well. It certainly has potential to become an good wallpaper.
Work on the grass and you might want to sue different grass brushes for that, to make it a bit more dynamic and if you want to create more depth in your grass field remeber that the front should be bigger and then slighlty decrease in size in the end.
Have to agree that the fence doesn't in the image well because it looks to realist compared to the rest of the image, perhaps redraw it or try blend in it better.
Good luck with your image and keep us updated :)
Work on the grass and you might want to sue different grass brushes for that, to make it a bit more dynamic and if you want to create more depth in your grass field remeber that the front should be bigger and then slighlty decrease in size in the end.
Have to agree that the fence doesn't in the image well because it looks to realist compared to the rest of the image, perhaps redraw it or try blend in it better.
Good luck with your image and keep us updated :)
Erm...what i would advise you to do, all the ppls above have already said >.<, so yea, not much to comment on. but definately a great start, and good luck with it! hope to see it soon in the gallery :)
I think you already make a cool job ^^
make the wood darker maybe
make the wood darker maybe
I do like the orange sky but it sure is bright. my opinion (personally) is to dim the sky a bit so the main focus is the character
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