I love this one the most. I wish that the opinions would be enough good that I could try to submit it.



Any opinions ?:)

I really enjoyed the 1st one, but i didn't like the 2nd..

Yep the first is really great and nosebleed but I don't want to publish the second

I like first wall, although you still have to improve the background put more detail and your signature this very up puts it but below, as for the second wallpaper the background is very simple it doesn't combine with the rest of the wall you should also remove the image that this in the right superior corner.

Thanks. The second wallpaper was made from boredom but I am really serious working on the "Innocent roses" wallpaper and I think that with a little more work it could be enough to publish.
Big thanks :)

Hi there,
I think that you need to cut down on the "glare" in the first wall. I know it can be a style to have the characters/focus blur into the background. However, I think it would look better if the characters were distinct from the background. It's just a little bit too bright in my opinion.
As to the second, it has the potential to be a lot of fun. maybe shift how you have it arranged for a better over all balance. For example move the foreground/main image to the right third of the wall. Then move the 2nd layer/image to the left a bit and move the small snapshot over to the left side about the same height maybe a little bit lower. The text for the name should also shift over to the left. Okay, enough of my telling you how I'd do the wall, it's yours not mine. So. Have fun with your wall.
Chonrad

Hi I love the first one. But it is a bit too bright to look at...will strain the eyes too much looking - it'd be hard not to look at it because the girls are so sweet!~ >v<~

Thanks a lot guys :) This opinions and advices are really helping me :)
I remaked a little "Innocent roses" wallpaper, it is a little bit more dark and colorful and there is also a sharpen version.


Beta sharpen version:

I am still working on this wallpaper because I really want to publish it.
Thanks for Your big help guys and how do You enjoy the new version?

I have an idea.
You may edid this wallpaper and show your own concept it this topic, it is be good because when it will be finish we could publish it with "Masaki ART" and Your own sign as our project.

I prefer the first version (on the post immediately, above, not in the first one)
Though I think there's something funny about the background... my first impression is that they're sitting on rose petals or something like that, but the effect isn't quite working, maybe if you do a little quest for brushes you could find something. So if what you have there are petals, it needs more depth and shadowing according to the characters sitting on them. When there's a blurry part of this "floor" above them, it looks a bit unnatural. For example, behind the girl with long hair.
I'm sorry if that's not the effect you were trying to make and just make thing abstract, it just was my first impression. ^^U
The hearts and the overall colors of that upper section of the wall are a bit too saturated, or a bit too purplish pink instead of the reddish pink in the rest of the wall. Hope that was clear enough. A bit of adjusting with ctrl+u (if you're using photoshop) will help.
Also, personally, I don't think the characters should be covered with texture and effects, at least not as much effects and textures as the background, since it blends too much, but I don't think that's a big problem.
Hope that helps you, good luck

THX really appreciate it:)

BTW. Sorry for my bad english :D