Could I get some feedback on this paper I made? I like it, but I wonder if I could do something different to make it stand out a little more? I think the image speaks for itself (and it had better, I spent enough time filling in gaps left by text bubbles, damn it!), but I'd really like it to be up to the standards of the site.

Shibuya District

Thanks for the feedback, everyone!

-Temmahkrik

Hhhmmm..nice one there...
okeyy..baCK to the wall...I think it would be best for taht wall if you add some color specially the the background so that it will not look too boring and plain...then you can also put some text there..a text that is more romantic or something fancy..well..it depends on you as long as it will matches to your scan..well..good luck on that..I hope this one helps you!good luck!~

A little colour could liven this up... maybe colour only the hair of the characters or something. The left is a bit plain... perhaps a little text? The part that fades away kinda annoys me, but I don't really know what you can do with that... too much blank space, though I can't really think of anything to put there.

The black and white image is very clean and clear and good job on that but like what the rest has said although black and white is cool and little color will just make it a little more eye catching. You don't even have to color the whole thing maybe just choose some parts to color like the ribbons maybe or the pillars... its really up to you. I also have to take notice on the blurring of the image in the bottom left... the blur effect is not quite right... maybe you could use both blur and smudge to make is a bit softer and blended.

If i'm not wrong, this is just a manga scan... which is unacceptable.
to the least the left side absolutely can't just fade off like that.
you can cut then reCG though.

as for the bg. black and white is alright but you'll need to add designs and other things in the bg.. not just a white space.

o well. the easiest way is reallly to find a better scan to work with. but Good Luck