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Okay, here's my Last Exile WIP: http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/2994/lastexile5ar.jpg It's so damn hard T_T I already drew one whole panel to expand it and I was too lazy to make it to the end of the wall XD I also expanded most of the clouds and that was also hard. I'm asking what to fill for the blank space on the right because I really don't wanna expand anymore T-T I'm a total stranger from this anime so I really need opinions from you guys. Thanks!
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Besides adding to the panels, what can I add to the foreground to cover up the edge? XD I'm lazy so bleh. If I'm forced to continue the edges, then I will T-T
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Besides adding to the panels, what can I add to the foreground to cover up the edge? XD I'm lazy so bleh. If I'm forced to continue the edges, then I will T-T
First of all, you need better topic titles. XD
Well, that said, I STRONGLY STRONGLY encourage you do the rest of the panels. It looks really out of place just cut-off like that, and even if something's covering it, I doubt it'd look much better. So, just... finish the panels? =x
Well, that said, I STRONGLY STRONGLY encourage you do the rest of the panels. It looks really out of place just cut-off like that, and even if something's covering it, I doubt it'd look much better. So, just... finish the panels? =x
An alternative would be to have heavy chains taking the place of the missing panels. Or maybe a guardrail? However, a panel would definitely be the best to fill up that empty space.
And if you look properly, you'd notice that the other panels have "walls" that protrude out. The part where they bolt panels to each other. However, there is none on the last panel on the right. That's what gives the impression of the panel being cut off. Add in a "wall" there and maybe a thick metal slab as an anchor.
Oh...and the "missing panel" area looks extremely empty because it's blank. Put in clouds to fill that place up.
And if you look properly, you'd notice that the other panels have "walls" that protrude out. The part where they bolt panels to each other. However, there is none on the last panel on the right. That's what gives the impression of the panel being cut off. Add in a "wall" there and maybe a thick metal slab as an anchor.
Oh...and the "missing panel" area looks extremely empty because it's blank. Put in clouds to fill that place up.
Ummm...i would put the silvana far off in the distance, or maybe claus and lavie flying around.
last exile is all about flying ships, range murata has some artwork of the vehicles i think.
but IMo you should stop being lazy and redraw, you are so good at it!
Have a nice day!
last exile is all about flying ships, range murata has some artwork of the vehicles i think.
but IMo you should stop being lazy and redraw, you are so good at it!
Have a nice day!
When I reflect upon this wall, it really scares me that I actually thought of doing it T_T So damn hard...=X Anyways, here's the WIP so far: http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/8769/lastexile9yy.jpg That's right, I finished off the panels. I also added some ships in the background thanks to some suggestions. I added two more clouds and text. That's basically it...=/ I'm still looking for suggestions! So fire on! >=D bleh...I'll fix the text later, so you guys dont' really have to bother with the cut =X
I don't know with you, but the colors look rather blah to me. =/ Maybe you could make the colors just a bit richer? And I'm not really too fond of the placing of the text. Everything in your wall is at a certain angle, and the text is just floating there, and so it looks distracting. Why don't you give the text some perspective so it would go well with the rest of the wallpaper?
And I'd like this better if you continued that thing she's leaning on all the way until the edge of the wallpaper, and then make the ships higher to fill in the brown space on the top right. But meh, that's just me.
And I'd like this better if you continued that thing she's leaning on all the way until the edge of the wallpaper, and then make the ships higher to fill in the brown space on the top right. But meh, that's just me.
Yes, I finished the panels or w/e they're called XD Here's the WIP: http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/4629/lastexile1is.jpg I adjusted the positioning of the ships to fill more space. I also fooled around with the layers and colouring to give it more of a punch =P The main thing I'm worried about now is the text, so any opinions/suggestions? Thanks a lot guys =D
REFRESH IF IT DOES NOT WORK =X
(now in the gallery)
REFRESH IF IT DOES NOT WORK =X
(now in the gallery)
#82137 Quote Report Edited by θtrismugistus 4 years 3 months ago
Well, i stared at this wall for like 5 minutes and found nothing wrong with it. colors are nice, text is good, ships look cool.
sorry!
Have a nice day!
sorry!
Have a nice day!
Indeed the text kind of bleh. It would be much better to leave this wall textless. If you want to put in the title, leave it as part of your wallpaper signature [i.e. LAST EXILE (C) GONZO].
If you are feeling up to the task, you can add in projectile streaks coming out in streams from the ships. That would add in some dynamism into the wallpaper. Give it that battlefield feel to the wall.
If you are feeling up to the task, you can add in projectile streaks coming out in streams from the ships. That would add in some dynamism into the wallpaper. Give it that battlefield feel to the wall.
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