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Sailor Venus Wall
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No... it's not done...
it's not even nearly halfway done =3
but I wanted to ask you guys about
the colors...
are they too bright?? too yellow??
too saturated~? I can't tell anymore... T-T
please comment =]
I really need the feadback...
all tips and comments are welcome =3
feedback please x3 ~!
it's not even nearly halfway done =3
but I wanted to ask you guys about
the colors...
are they too bright?? too yellow??
too saturated~? I can't tell anymore... T-T
please comment =]
I really need the feadback...
all tips and comments are welcome =3
feedback please x3 ~!
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3 years 1 month ago
The stained glass motif is quite interesting, and the tones of the character fite well into the background...except the "stone" frame on the left side. The texture looks way too CG and doesn't mesh well with the rest of the image. I'd recommend running an oil-paint algorithm on it (or something else to soften its appearance) or dropping the fram altogether.
I'm liking it so far. And I like the touch of closing her eyes. Really adds a dramatic feel to the original image.
I agree with both of the members. In my opinion, it is superbly NICE! GREAT WORK!
DOn't worry if it is too yellow or bright, wasn't Sailor Venus is represented with yellow and orange (PS READERS please correct me here if I'm wrong, after all, I read the manga Sailor Moon around7 years ago, what else do you expect?)
DOn't worry if it is too yellow or bright, wasn't Sailor Venus is represented with yellow and orange (PS READERS please correct me here if I'm wrong, after all, I read the manga Sailor Moon around7 years ago, what else do you expect?)
I agree with the other two members ,cheche.
The stone thingy at the side is a little off.
Love the yellow and orange.It goes with Venus's custome really well.
I like her hair and everything but some i cant's take my eyes off her face.
It looks kinda weird.Love that you chose to close her eyes.
It's gonna come out great.Keep it up.
Just have patience with it and you'll do fine.^_^
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The stone thingy at the side is a little off.
Love the yellow and orange.It goes with Venus's custome really well.
I like her hair and everything but some i cant's take my eyes off her face.
It looks kinda weird.Love that you chose to close her eyes.
It's gonna come out great.Keep it up.
Just have patience with it and you'll do fine.^_^
"Practice makes perfect"
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I think the colors look great and that this will be a wonderful addition to your series!
Just a small thing I noticed though, in her hair at the top of the wall are a few parts where the color comes outside of the lines. Not really a big thing, but I thought I'd let you know since I caught it.
Good luck finishing it up, it's really coming along quite nicely!
Just a small thing I noticed though, in her hair at the top of the wall are a few parts where the color comes outside of the lines. Not really a big thing, but I thought I'd let you know since I caught it.
Good luck finishing it up, it's really coming along quite nicely!
XD yeah the wall's not finished either
all the small imperfections will be gone don't worry =3
what's wrong with her face is that its too small x3
originally the scan was a lot smaller, I vectored her again
because I wasn't happy with the size
but didn't get to her face right away =]
but all that's going to change =D
so I guess everyone likes the colors??
then I shall continue~!
thnx guys ^.^
all the small imperfections will be gone don't worry =3
what's wrong with her face is that its too small x3
originally the scan was a lot smaller, I vectored her again
because I wasn't happy with the size
but didn't get to her face right away =]
but all that's going to change =D
so I guess everyone likes the colors??
then I shall continue~!
thnx guys ^.^
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Definitely another masterpiece in the making. ^_^ I don't know how you keep coming up with these wonderfully beautiful layouts like you do, but they are truly remarkable to see.
k, well, now that the well earned flattery portion is done, here's my (hopefully helpful) thoughts:
1.) many of the lines look a bit thicker than the previous walls, so maybe diminish the thickness some?
2.) her legs and skirt look too cluttered to me, too many lines, the effect makes it look just a bit odd somehow...
3.) her shoe looks somewhat off, it's too long/pointy and it seems to have part of it missing between the tip of her foot and her heal.
That's all I have, it's not much, but I hope its useful n_n
k, well, now that the well earned flattery portion is done, here's my (hopefully helpful) thoughts:
1.) many of the lines look a bit thicker than the previous walls, so maybe diminish the thickness some?
2.) her legs and skirt look too cluttered to me, too many lines, the effect makes it look just a bit odd somehow...
3.) her shoe looks somewhat off, it's too long/pointy and it seems to have part of it missing between the tip of her foot and her heal.
That's all I have, it's not much, but I hope its useful n_n
3 years 1 month ago
Umm, actually, I have a problem with the colors. or maybe, the strength of the colors, they kinda hurt my eyes a little, I don't know if you are going to end up toning it down for your end product with lighting or anything, but right now, they are very vibrant, more vibrant than stained glass should be, I imagine.
something you might want to try is making a black layer, then rendering some lighting effects, then placing your completed wall over it and lower the opacity a little, I think that might work. but then again, maybe it wouldn't.
again, the colors go very well together, they are just very strong and hard on the eyes, (IMO)
can't wait to see your finished version! keep it up!
something you might want to try is making a black layer, then rendering some lighting effects, then placing your completed wall over it and lower the opacity a little, I think that might work. but then again, maybe it wouldn't.
again, the colors go very well together, they are just very strong and hard on the eyes, (IMO)
can't wait to see your finished version! keep it up!
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You want to make all the gallery series of sailors?
Anyway, the image contrast is good, so you don't need to worry about that. But in my personal opinion I think the lines of sailor venus are very strong, maybe a little less thicknesses.
Anyway, the image contrast is good, so you don't need to worry about that. But in my personal opinion I think the lines of sailor venus are very strong, maybe a little less thicknesses.
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