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Shana Vector
Please tell me it's nice.
Cus my bro said it's not that good when I showed it to him.
Any suggestions on this?
Cus my bro said it's not that good when I showed it to him.
Any suggestions on this?
#606651 Quote Report Edited by ~KeyEternal 1 year 2 months ago
It looks good, but you basically used all sorts of vector brushes and dotted them on the wallpaper
but ignoring how you went about doing this, i think its looks good, not sure what your bro is on about, no eye for design?
but ignoring how you went about doing this, i think its looks good, not sure what your bro is on about, no eye for design?
...Random Brushes...
I recommend you stay on vector brushes...(that means remove the bug thingies)
I also don't like the "consumer" words all around the wall.. I suggest changing to a brush that doesn't have any words/letters..
Shana vector is a bit un-detailed (I'm pointing at her body).. why not show more detail there.. and also her skirt kinda looks messed up there..
Hope that helps even for a little bit
I recommend you stay on vector brushes...(that means remove the bug thingies)
I also don't like the "consumer" words all around the wall.. I suggest changing to a brush that doesn't have any words/letters..
Shana vector is a bit un-detailed (I'm pointing at her body).. why not show more detail there.. and also her skirt kinda looks messed up there..
Hope that helps even for a little bit
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I like this one a lot but only thing is you kinda loose the body of the girl which kinda makes her look like she's just got a head an arm with some legs lol but other than that those random things look cool ^^
Yeap i think its pretty cool, the vector id great really, the only thing you might wanna fix is what chaosx said XD, maybe also the tect, and probably i dont know add some color, no to all but some parts! hope this helps!
good luck! *:)
good luck! *:)
i m s o o o h a p p y t o b e m a r r i e d t o W i l l !
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I think you should change the shade of her skirt and shirt because they look kinda weird cause theyre the same colour. Also like said above lose the bugs and consumer.
Right, I'll be editing after that. Thanks for the help.
Other than removing the bugs and the 'consumer' thingy, any other suggestions?
Edit: Another thing, anyone have a good title for this? Cus I still dunno what to call it.
Other than removing the bugs and the 'consumer' thingy, any other suggestions?
Edit: Another thing, anyone have a good title for this? Cus I still dunno what to call it.
#607759 Quote Report Edited by ~KeyEternal 1 year 2 months ago
The vector of shana could use lots of more details, I wouldn't have noticed her if it wasn't because of your title. (I would even dare to say you could add colors to her, at least on her hair since it's all firey and all)
I agree on removing the bugs, but you should replace them with other vector brush (basically you should remove them because their style is too different, the layout is ok)
My suggestion is a custom melon-bread vector brush =3
As for a title, you have consumer written all over it, so what's wrong with that title? And remember to add you name at the bottom.
Good luck, hope this turns out great =3
I agree on removing the bugs, but you should replace them with other vector brush (basically you should remove them because their style is too different, the layout is ok)
My suggestion is a custom melon-bread vector brush =3
As for a title, you have consumer written all over it, so what's wrong with that title? And remember to add you name at the bottom.
Good luck, hope this turns out great =3
Here's what I've done.
Good or bad? Suggestions? Is it okay to post it in the gallery then?
Edit: Again, any other good title for this?
Good or bad? Suggestions? Is it okay to post it in the gallery then?
Edit: Again, any other good title for this?
#608817 Quote Report Edited by ~KeyEternal 1 year 2 months ago
1 year 2 months ago
OMG this reminds me a little of Shindlers List.
I really like the revisions you have done. You took out the bugs and the consumers and it looks a lot better. The addition of red is nice it brings out the body better. I like both but the second one is a lot cleaner. Sorry dont really know a good title.
Keep up the good work
I really like the revisions you have done. You took out the bugs and the consumers and it looks a lot better. The addition of red is nice it brings out the body better. I like both but the second one is a lot cleaner. Sorry dont really know a good title.
Keep up the good work
Updated:
-Added the title
What do you think of the title? Does it fit the wall?
-Added the title
What do you think of the title? Does it fit the wall?
#608849 Quote Report Edited by ~KeyEternal 1 year 2 months ago
Your shana vector looks a little choppy in places, like this part on her shoe and her right hand fingers. and i think it'd look better if her hair ended in sharp points rather than the duller rounded tips you've got right now. your brushes of choice look more detailed than shana to me(^^; because she's larger) but since i know i lean in favor of detailed vectors, i won't tell you to change that. because my opinion would be quite biased.
ah, arrows and circles are so typical of design walls. because they look nice. i'm fine with the circles but as for the arrows, consider having some of different widths/sizes. the shade variation is good, but i'd like to see some size variation in that forest of arrows. (another thing though: i don't quite like the gray duplicate of that black shape above the text...is the duplicate necessary?)
finally, the text. the words themselves are fine. as to the style, i'm unsure because i don't mind it. and yet if compared to just how clean cut and bold the rest of your wall is, it's a tiny bit off. and here's a thought: the rest of your wall is at an angle so why have horizontal text? think about how you can better incorporate you text to fit the flow of your wallpaper.
this looks quite nice. good luck with it. :D
ah, arrows and circles are so typical of design walls. because they look nice. i'm fine with the circles but as for the arrows, consider having some of different widths/sizes. the shade variation is good, but i'd like to see some size variation in that forest of arrows. (another thing though: i don't quite like the gray duplicate of that black shape above the text...is the duplicate necessary?)
finally, the text. the words themselves are fine. as to the style, i'm unsure because i don't mind it. and yet if compared to just how clean cut and bold the rest of your wall is, it's a tiny bit off. and here's a thought: the rest of your wall is at an angle so why have horizontal text? think about how you can better incorporate you text to fit the flow of your wallpaper.
this looks quite nice. good luck with it. :D
U can see her ass.. but theres nothing their.. lol! if your going to do the sexy thing i would suggest putting some panties on her. ^-^
Thanks. I'll work on that.
1 year 2 months ago
The white slashes across the arrows in the back are overkill. Take the white out and stick with the arrows themselves. And there is an awkward twist in a piece of her hair, on the left, second from the top. It looks flat, maybe some rearranging of anchor points is in order.
Aside from that, good job. This simplified vector style has its good points.
Aside from that, good job. This simplified vector style has its good points.
