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black cat
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2 years 7 months ago
I did this wallpaper for fun and i just want to know what you think.
http://img81.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled13hf.jpg
http://img81.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled13hf.jpg
The scan portion is like 15% of the wall and all the way on the left lol.. But it actually looks nice. Clean the scan up a little bit, get someone else's suggestion and its a keeper ^^
Please don't call me puppychow. *stabs username with a spork* Phoenix will do.
Erm.. okay this is what I think.
The image is too far to the left. It disturbs the whole proportion of the wallpaper as an 'anime' wallpaper. But as an abstract wallpaper, it's fine.
The abstract is kinda focused on the dark turbulence-like abstract on the left-center part of the wall. It's like a black hole which distracts viewer's eye from the characters. It might be better to use a different abstract style or to remove that darkmost part at all.
And lastly, the colors are somewhat not matching well. Use a light-brownish color for the abstract to match the scan better, or make it more desaturated to make it more neutral.
I hope my comments are of any use. Good job btw, keep it up. :)
The image is too far to the left. It disturbs the whole proportion of the wallpaper as an 'anime' wallpaper. But as an abstract wallpaper, it's fine.
The abstract is kinda focused on the dark turbulence-like abstract on the left-center part of the wall. It's like a black hole which distracts viewer's eye from the characters. It might be better to use a different abstract style or to remove that darkmost part at all.
And lastly, the colors are somewhat not matching well. Use a light-brownish color for the abstract to match the scan better, or make it more desaturated to make it more neutral.
I hope my comments are of any use. Good job btw, keep it up. :)
2 years 7 months ago
Aye, as stated above, I'd suggest blending the foreground more with the bg. Also, the text looks a bit plain, maybe give it some pizazz (pizazz != times new roman [at least most of the time]) :P
2 years 7 months ago
Lol ok... thanks for your comments. i also thought it was to much to the left... i aslo blan to but it in a darker background what do you think.. im just replacing the white.
2 years 7 months ago
This one is so different but i really like what i did with it.
http://img383.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled116jc.jpg
http://img383.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled116jc.jpg
It looks like you just put a scan on top of a real looking pic b/c the moon i think.
2 years 6 months ago
So is it bad?
is there anything wrong with it, tell me what you think.
do you like the first oneor this one.
is there anything wrong with it, tell me what you think.
do you like the first oneor this one.
2 years 6 months ago
Um please someone help!! what do you think
- http://img309.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled116jc4wi.jpg
- http://img309.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled116jc4wi.jpg
I ab-so-lutly love this one, i really really do. I dont think that the moon looks too realistic. I think its really really good!
good luck!!
^_^
good luck!!
^_^
The first version of your wallpaper, I loved the abstract background!! But I too thought that it could of been changed to a different colour =P
Your second version of your wallpaper is much better =P Its not too much to the left now =3 The only thing I am going to complain about =P Is the text you chose to use! That text just doesn't really go with the wallpaper, try a better and more swirly font.
But overall both versions of your wallpapers are nice. If you are going to submit them into AnimePaper Good luck with the approval! =3
Your second version of your wallpaper is much better =P Its not too much to the left now =3 The only thing I am going to complain about =P Is the text you chose to use! That text just doesn't really go with the wallpaper, try a better and more swirly font.
But overall both versions of your wallpapers are nice. If you are going to submit them into AnimePaper Good luck with the approval! =3
2 years 6 months ago
I think the abstract background is amazing, your first try isn't bad and if you intend on keeping the background, my suggestions would be try to make it less realistic and i guess try to find a element to focus and a main theme to focus on, since the scan is black cat, so you might wanna think of somehting black cat, but can sorta say it's outa this work, lol..plus this is minor but i think you can use a better font
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