Ergo Proxy Wallpaper

Hi! First post and first wallpaper... yay for being *completely* new.

Any suggestions, comments or opinions would be great.

Thank you!

Well it´s not bad really (plain but ok ^^°)
was that source picture a little jagged or is it due to effects?
however, the only thing i dont really like is the text...you might try some effekts there too (to make it look more freaky)?

I know...I've got a long way to go on making them more interesting... The source picture was kind of jagged and then I added things to try and make it blend in better, but I didn't entirely succeed. What's the best way to fix something like that?

Thanks for the suggestion about the text. I will try to fix it! Thank you!

Hi scififreak ^^
If you want to try and fix the edges up on the scan try using the Pen Tool ^^ Read some tutorials and get to know the Pen Tool more and how to use it and that.

The wallpaper is really interesting, I think you chould highlight the eyes a bit more, to enthusize that the eyes are yellow, and yellow in a black/dark background would look really cool XP You can make the eyes light by using the Dodge Tool.
The only other thing I want to tell you is not to forget to place your sig on the wallpaper or it's a 100% rejection ^^ Hope my advice helps you in some way. Good luck!! ^^

aaaaaaaaarrrrrgggggggg noooo you took the pic i was gonna use for my next ergo proxy wall!!! well i'll still help you for this one. now the screenshot of Vincent needs a good cleaining, get tutorials for that (google is your friend) and you didn't balance the contrast and the colors well. you should also take two different fonts for ERGO PROXY and your sentence i think...

if you need inspiration go see the others wall of Ergo Proxy in the gallery (no i don't say that because mine is there :p )