Help with Latest Wall!
Hi guys! Yeah this will be my 2nd upcoming wallpaper! yeah! but I feel that something is missing and I'm not sure what it is. So can you guys help me out? Thanx!
If you see anythign wrong, or feel thats something shouldn't be there, TELL ME! Don't be afraid to make harsh criticism! I need it to make better walls!
Oh and can anyone tell me whats the name of the character too? Thanx!
Here's ANother update AGAIN! (3rd update):
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v302/abdon85/NurseWitchKomugi-workprogress3.jpg
Keep the suggestions comin!
If you see anythign wrong, or feel thats something shouldn't be there, TELL ME! Don't be afraid to make harsh criticism! I need it to make better walls!
Oh and can anyone tell me whats the name of the character too? Thanx!
Here's ANother update AGAIN! (3rd update):
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v302/abdon85/NurseWitchKomugi-workprogress3.jpg
Keep the suggestions comin!
#276314 Quote Report Edited by `OtakuGaijin 2 years 6 months ago
I see you used a background tutorial, good for you ;) Don't forget to put your signature at the bottom.
Its adorable ^^. Things you maybe can improve is the contrast, feels just little overbrighted right now. I think its a quite nice wallpaper, remember that simple things can be very beautiful. Good luck!
I kinda like this komugi picture ^^°
gaijin-san you´re right there is missing something, but i cannot point my finger on it (sorry, i know this isnt helpful)
however, it already looks cool, but iOWa´s right, it´s a little too bright
the character´s name is nakahara komugi
gaijin-san you´re right there is missing something, but i cannot point my finger on it (sorry, i know this isnt helpful)
however, it already looks cool, but iOWa´s right, it´s a little too bright
the character´s name is nakahara komugi
Nice start!
the brightnesss is not that. bad.
the quality is nice tooo with just some fuzzy things on the hair part
try putting her 1/3 the way from the right instead of the middle.. you're probably gonna need some sort of text on the left side. then make the bg more interesting
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the brightnesss is not that. bad.
the quality is nice tooo with just some fuzzy things on the hair part
try putting her 1/3 the way from the right instead of the middle.. you're probably gonna need some sort of text on the left side. then make the bg more interesting
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Yeah I need more suggestion! keep them coming!
More comments? Ok, but I warned you! ......well I didn't but anyway.
You got a nice colorful background with stars and swirls and etc. But nothin out in front, the entire background is in the back, I gess you could say thats why they call it background, but well whatecver.
So what Im thinking is this; Get shiny rings of energy and happyness around her like 3 or 4, butterflys flying around, sparkles flying, big planets behind, flowers, trees, water sprinkles, mirrow images: is she standing on water!?!?!?
oky good luck
You got a nice colorful background with stars and swirls and etc. But nothin out in front, the entire background is in the back, I gess you could say thats why they call it background, but well whatecver.
So what Im thinking is this; Get shiny rings of energy and happyness around her like 3 or 4, butterflys flying around, sparkles flying, big planets behind, flowers, trees, water sprinkles, mirrow images: is she standing on water!?!?!?
oky good luck
Uhh that's a little too much no?
Oh yes the imanimations bg tutorial :)
2 years 6 months ago
Hi, Its so cute and adorable. Some things for what i can see is make it a little bit darker. It seems a little bit to bright. But for the most part its great. You have the right colors and everything. Very cute too.
Hmm, I'm not really liking that vertically motion-blurred copy of Komugi; if you're trying to convey the effect that she's flying upwards or something like that, it's rather too long and rigid looking. Perhaps tone it down some.
Good luck!
"Rings of happiness"? I'd be very interested to see what those look like. =Þ
Good luck!
gatGet shiny rings of energy and happyness
"Rings of happiness"? I'd be very interested to see what those look like. =Þ
How bout putting some simple lighting effect on her?? (If you can't just ignore my idea):P...Perhaps you can get the wings-blurry effect-down a bit (didn't touch the upper-WP-exposing the whole wings). It'll be nice... I guess:) Anyway The BG is ok:)
Thanks, I took in all the suggestions and I'm making the necessary adjustments, wait for an update! In the meantime, keep the suggestions rolling!
Update on wall!
Man photobucket suks, can you post it in imageshack, its much better. And oh whenever you update it, post a new link in a new comment below ther origianal, so post the link below my comment. I can't view it for some reason, photobucket won't let me.
Come to my house I show you :P
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gatGet shiny rings of energy and happyness
"Rings of happiness"? I'd be very interested to see what those look like. =Þ
Come to my house I show you :P





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