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Final Fantasy X-2 wallpaper
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3 years 4 months ago
The scan of rikku in the background needs to be vectored.. or you need to find a better quality scan of her. i think you should change the font of their names.
it's a cool concept though. keep working at it!
it's a cool concept though. keep working at it!
I like the consecpt of the wall trying to go wor that Ipop look type thing but its not working. I would suggest reverting the maing image back to the character faes and outfits. Also If you are going to use black for Paine in the BG make it a little more tanslucent so it can been seen better.
3 years 4 months ago
Ok thanks i got it , any other suggesition before i re-make it ?
3 years 4 months ago
Just two suggestions: first, try to make yuna more visible somehow. maybe it's just me, but i find that it's kind of unbalanced that i can see rikku and paine clearly, but yuna is covered up. and second, about the logo, either make it larger so that it's easier to see amano's accompanying artwork or get rid of the picture and just leave the text. that's all, just suggesitons. good luck. ^_^
Try to find better images for your bckground, and better fonts for the names. I personally don't like to add text in an image ( with some exceptions of course ), but if you're going to do so, try to out a font that blends nicely with your picture. Anyway, good job and keep trying.
3 years 4 months ago
3 years 4 months ago
Hey anyone ... i made another one so what do you think (( don't ignor me please i need your help to subbmit it ))
Some possible suggestions:
-use a different background - ight now, i find that i'm starring more at the background than the sillouettes (which look nice too but isn't really effective in your concept)
-pick one set of images (either the sillouettes or the screenshots) and use that, because that images are just too different (background=detailed, sillouettes=no detail)
-colourize the background pictures of Rikku, Yuna and Paine - imo, there are too many conflicting colours
-move the sillouettes up a little - if someone were to use it right now, Yuna's feet would get cut off^^;;;
i think that'sall i can think of right now^^;;; keep trying :3
-use a different background - ight now, i find that i'm starring more at the background than the sillouettes (which look nice too but isn't really effective in your concept)
-pick one set of images (either the sillouettes or the screenshots) and use that, because that images are just too different (background=detailed, sillouettes=no detail)
-colourize the background pictures of Rikku, Yuna and Paine - imo, there are too many conflicting colours
-move the sillouettes up a little - if someone were to use it right now, Yuna's feet would get cut off^^;;;
i think that'sall i can think of right now^^;;; keep trying :3
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Hm . . The logo is covering Yuna's face. But seeing how the wallpaper is as full as it already is, it's hard to move it anywhere else. It's the only real thing that's bothering me. Perhaps you should remove it; if not, somehow blend it in as part of the background without covering up anything else. =]
There are also a tad too much different colors. It's good to go colorful (I personally prefer more linear walls >< ) But too much is a bad thing. I suggest choosing a few colors and colorizing the background using just those colors.
More to come as I think of it. =D
There are also a tad too much different colors. It's good to go colorful (I personally prefer more linear walls >< ) But too much is a bad thing. I suggest choosing a few colors and colorizing the background using just those colors.
More to come as I think of it. =D
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Hmm. The Bg need work. I like the concept and the composition but i think it's to much colour in the bg. It looks unbalanced somehow. I would suggest that you have the X (i think it's a X) Should be in the same color.
The face on the girl on the left should be smaller (or other pic). She's catching my eyes and the red part on her face area remove it there are to much going on on the left part. you could make a X in the middle and there fore use it as a frame for each area. The position of the logo is cover Yunas face. you could remove it or find a better spot for it.
That's some suggestion. I want you to think about balance and colour blending when you working on this. Keep on trying looking good so far. :)
good luck
The face on the girl on the left should be smaller (or other pic). She's catching my eyes and the red part on her face area remove it there are to much going on on the left part. you could make a X in the middle and there fore use it as a frame for each area. The position of the logo is cover Yunas face. you could remove it or find a better spot for it.
That's some suggestion. I want you to think about balance and colour blending when you working on this. Keep on trying looking good so far. :)
good luck
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LoL. the bg is wayyy too blurry. and pixelly, and the people look too faded/dull
the text has this overlay outline
main problem is that this wall doesn't have a bg.
:/
well. good luck!
my advice is to choose better scans to work with
LoL. the bg is wayyy too blurry. and pixelly, and the people look too faded/dull
the text has this overlay outline
main problem is that this wall doesn't have a bg.
:/
well. good luck!
my advice is to choose better scans to work with
3 years 4 months ago
Here's some big advice for this wall:
VECTOR THE CHARACTERS.
Including the silhouttes.
They all look jagged, and the transparent colored shapes you added on top doesn't really match.
Either choose better colors, or take them away and add some texture or brushes.
Kay?
Good luck.
VECTOR THE CHARACTERS.
Including the silhouttes.
They all look jagged, and the transparent colored shapes you added on top doesn't really match.
Either choose better colors, or take them away and add some texture or brushes.
Kay?
Good luck.
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