Noir Kirika Yuumura
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My latest wall I am still working on this one I need some feedback on what to fix and all that
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Hhhmm..your Bg and scan don't blend that well..
It looks too flat, no depth
the render looks like it's in there for the sake of having a render, it doesn't blend with the background (as said above)
i think your choice for font could be better as well, although there is no 'better' font, it just comes down to an eye for design
anyways, keep it up, improve on it
the render looks like it's in there for the sake of having a render, it doesn't blend with the background (as said above)
i think your choice for font could be better as well, although there is no 'better' font, it just comes down to an eye for design
anyways, keep it up, improve on it
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