wow these kinda took tyme
#293809 Quote Report Edited by ~shaboobalaboopy 3 years 6 months ago
I can't see anything wrong with the second one but then again I know very little about scenes.
the first one i'm not too sure about. there's so many conflicting styles. grungy text, abstract art, and the 3-d fluffy render thingy. i think the bg is going to need more work, definitely choose a one style (and i don't like the logo either...).
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mewto wall looks awesome, maybe do the tekst a bit vertical instead of horizontal ore sompt. nice matrix font that is true :P maybe make it also a but purple. I dont think the pokemon logo needs to be there, as far is i can see nice job and submittable
Second one looks like a very awesome piece of work, only thing bugging me is the fist of the big dude, the bottom side is a bit blurry with a outerglow it appears. try to extract this a bit better. And it also bugs me i think that there isnt a shadow on the ground.. try to fix that also
awesome jobs, good luck
Subcre8orwow awesome, i like the mewtwo wall, one thing i would change is the mewtwo power text, that is all looks sweet dude!
I agree with him about the text.
I don't know how improve it so i think you should wait the comment from one more expert than me.
Anyway, continu working on them; i'm sure they will be accepted.
Good job.
#294562 Quote Report Edited by ~shaboobalaboopy 3 years 6 months ago
ummm, i'm really not sure how i feel about the purple poofy thing he's on. i'm not sure if this is asking alot of you, i'm not even sure i could do it, but maybe vector it? so it's the same style as the rest of the wall. (i like the text ;P)
Well, I think you could give it a try.
But without this, the wallpaper is awesome ;)
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