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Yuna X-2
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This wallpaper was rejected because i forgot to put a signature on it
do you think it's worth re-submitting it ?
do you think it's worth re-submitting it ?
I think you should clean the black dotted line under the text.
Other than that, it looks quite great to me, but wait for other comments as I am not yet an expert ;)
Other than that, it looks quite great to me, but wait for other comments as I am not yet an expert ;)
#298331 Quote Report Edited by $ManOnDaMoon 3 years 6 months ago
- ManOnDaMoon -
Member of the French-speaking people group.
Yea id definately re submit that its very nice just mabye do sumthing about the line near the bottom were it goes dark.
SO PRETTY! Re submit that. I hope it gets entered.
Border is not very good. especially cause it's grey.
bg is too empty, there's hardly anything except white.
places where there's acutlaly something is too messy. and blurry, and grainy.
ghost image not good.
extraction on her really needs work too.
i see white on her hair. black between her fingers.
leg is jagged.
and that bar you have on her isn't very pretty either.
sorry for being harsh.^^ i wish you luck
bg is too empty, there's hardly anything except white.
places where there's acutlaly something is too messy. and blurry, and grainy.
ghost image not good.
extraction on her really needs work too.
i see white on her hair. black between her fingers.
leg is jagged.
and that bar you have on her isn't very pretty either.
sorry for being harsh.^^ i wish you luck
OO I like it. I like it a lot. The grey border is good with the blend, anything else would be too overpowering. Maybe spread out a little more of the blend into the white. Fix the extraction up a little bit and your good!
blu3anglborder is not very good. especially cause it's grey.
yeah i reduced it but i like grey
blu3anglbg is too empty, there's hardly anything except white.
some people make art with a black dot in a middle of a white board
blu3anglplaces where there's acutlaly something is too messy. and blurry, and grainy.
sharp and clear i don't think it would work here
blu3anglghost image not good.
i don't know what is ghost image ?
blu3anglextraction on her really needs work too.
i see white on her hair. black between her fingers.
leg is jagged.
i fixed that but there is no black between her fingers
blu3angland that bar you have on her isn't very pretty either.
what bar ?
blu3anglsorry for being harsh.^^ i wish you luck
thanks
here is an update :
Ghost image as in another faded image in the bg.
no no i'm sure sharp doesn't work here, but smooth doesn't mean it's blurry.
i hope everything you've got there in the bg is somehow related to the series, especially those numbers.
by bar, before there was a bar over her body..
still white in the hair/tailhair?
there seems to be some kind of white faint outline on her shoes.
i don't know, even if you want simple...no matter what you say...white is...
C:
no no i'm sure sharp doesn't work here, but smooth doesn't mean it's blurry.
i hope everything you've got there in the bg is somehow related to the series, especially those numbers.
by bar, before there was a bar over her body..
still white in the hair/tailhair?
there seems to be some kind of white faint outline on her shoes.
i don't know, even if you want simple...no matter what you say...white is...
C:
It's not simple. It's very detailed, colorful, and pretty!
3 years 6 months ago
It looks very nice, but the + symbol near her right-side foot looks a little strange.
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