[Oban] Second Wallpaper
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Okay, here I am with a whole new first-version-not-completed-and very-simple-but-rather-good-looking-wall \o/

It is from an anime airing in France (and soon in Japan) "Oban Star-Racers". I used several screencaps to vectorize the character in Illustrator. She was originally holding her shoes, but that was quite not aesthetic so I redrew the hand xD. Then I used Photoshop to draw the sky and a standard brush to add the grass bits.
Well I know, it is *very* simple. I don't know if I should really add more effects, it's up to you to comment on this point :)
What I sure want to do : fix this translucent grass bit in front of the girl's shirt >_<, maybe either change the color of the shirt or add a design onto it, and add something in the sky (bird(s) ? airplane(s) ? moon(s) ?).

It is from an anime airing in France (and soon in Japan) "Oban Star-Racers". I used several screencaps to vectorize the character in Illustrator. She was originally holding her shoes, but that was quite not aesthetic so I redrew the hand xD. Then I used Photoshop to draw the sky and a standard brush to add the grass bits.
Well I know, it is *very* simple. I don't know if I should really add more effects, it's up to you to comment on this point :)
What I sure want to do : fix this translucent grass bit in front of the girl's shirt >_<, maybe either change the color of the shirt or add a design onto it, and add something in the sky (bird(s) ? airplane(s) ? moon(s) ?).
In my opinion definately change the grass in front of her but as for adding anything as i have not seen the anime i cant really suggest anything to go with it :S. It could definately benifit from something else added to it.
BTW nice job on the hands they look very good
Good luck on finding something to add i look forward to seeing an updated version
BTW nice job on the hands they look very good
Good luck on finding something to add i look forward to seeing an updated version
Change the grass some, I'd suggest -not- using the default photoshop brush. And maybe to fill up the empty space in the top left put some text there in a font like Dauphin or italic Times New Roman. Good luck! You've got a great start, it just needs a little more.
Excuse me for beeing late, I had a full exams week :D
I made a second version of the wall :

I added some birds to fill the empty sky. I tried to make some grass using Illustrator, but the result was not realistic (you can see it on the example above...). Sorry, lufiamanaelf, I decided to keep the photoshop brush I used before... :S
I added a lens flare effect and some extra text with the final name \o/
EDIT : I forgot to mention the blur effect, but I dropped it in the v3...
EDIT 2 (lol) : I forgot something in the v3 : I should rotate one or several birds, like I did in v2, cause they all look the same way >_<
EDIT 3 ... : Okay, @^| photoshop brush... there are grass bits growing in the air \o/
And here is the v3 :

Thanks to all ;)
I made a second version of the wall :

I added some birds to fill the empty sky. I tried to make some grass using Illustrator, but the result was not realistic (you can see it on the example above...). Sorry, lufiamanaelf, I decided to keep the photoshop brush I used before... :S
I added a lens flare effect and some extra text with the final name \o/
EDIT : I forgot to mention the blur effect, but I dropped it in the v3...
EDIT 2 (lol) : I forgot something in the v3 : I should rotate one or several birds, like I did in v2, cause they all look the same way >_<
EDIT 3 ... : Okay, @^| photoshop brush... there are grass bits growing in the air \o/
And here is the v3 :

Thanks to all ;)
#303339 Quote Report Edited by $ManOnDaMoon 3 years 5 months ago
The birds are very nice! The text, though, looks out of place. It looks too grainy. And another thing, .jpg makes things look too grainy. I'd suggest .gif or .png.
Hmmm...I think you should lessen the birds...and you should really work on that sun...it's not good to use lens flare to be the sun...hehehe
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