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New Bleach wall
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Well, I need a bit of help on this one. xD Looking for a title and a good font, too. I also want to know if Byakuya needs colour fixing, because...he looks a bit strange. Here's the link!
Original scan
And if there's any other ways of improving it, please tell me. ^_^;
-Thanks in advance :D
Original scan
And if there's any other ways of improving it, please tell me. ^_^;
-Thanks in advance :D
Some of Byakuya's outline looks sketchy, like round his hair and the thing on his back. Did you recolour him or something? It looks like the colour blocks don't quite match the lineart perfectly. Maybe you should put in some foliage or a building on the distance, to fill some of the space.
Yea, I recolored him @.@; I'll see how I can fix that. o.o
There are blue spots in his hair. The bg is a tad plain. Plan to add text? The snowy bg is kind.. er flat. Spunk it up ^^
Please don't call me puppychow. *stabs username with a spork* Phoenix will do.
He looks full of angst...perhaps because...he's lost in a snowy place? o_o Put some trees and a log cabin the in the background! Nice n' cozy! X3 ...or not >.>; But he also looks a bit seperate from the background...like he was glued on O_O; Fix him, ne? Then he won't be as sad! ^^
Alright, I'm going to try vectoring him now. :S
Pertty nice. I like the background but the scan seems a little pixalated and boxy. o_0
I really think the new version is a big improvement. The vectoring makes the image look much more crisp. Might I suggest that now you try and make him blend more with the background. Not to much but just a little. Of course its up to you, I think it will look good either way :P Good luck, I'm look forward to the submission.
Uploaded and accepted alreay. o.o
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