Well I need help on my very first wallpaper. Please tell me what you think needs to be changed. Overall I want it to keep it the same look and not have to redo it over again.

Here it is:
http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h142/Ryofusuki/AirWallpaper3.jpg

Please tell me what you think!

I feel like the character is too blurry.. perhaps you should vector her.

PS: Lots of people will probably get onto you for using standard PS filters like that. :x Perhaps you should try using textures and brushes instead of filters.

I'm not really digging the font, either and I feel that your sig is a bit too big.

Hope I helped (at least a little). :P

I feel like the character is too blurry.. perhaps you should vector her.

PS: Lots of people will probably get onto you for using standard PS filters like that. :x Perhaps you should try using textures and brushes instead of filters.

I'm not really digging the font, either and I feel that your sig is a bit too big.

Hope I helped (at least a little). :P

Oh okay thanks. That was really helpful. I will start editing it.

Oh and I forgot to mention that I am going for a dead and alive concept. Everything not alive is grayscaled and everything that is alive is the natural color. And yes your hair is dead. So, don't start me on that. lol And so is your skin, but there are many layers that are a live. Just the outer part is, but that is transparent.

Hmmm pretty cool idea you're going for here, though the little chibi is really blurry and low on quality so vectoring is the answer to that ^^ The background seems like it's all filters...though it seems a little cool too BUT I don't like that mosaic sort of idea on the background it just seems 'out of whack' in the wallpaper. I like the idea of having the dead and alive coloured and grayscaled, very unique idea!

I'm not really liking the beveal and contour sort of feel, makes the wallpaper seem 'dead' Unless you have no idea on what I'm talking about XD It's just that bits of the wallpaper seem 'lifted' and it doesn't look good. I think you could add more to the background so it isn't too plain with the filtering. Maybe some sort of pattern on the background wall?? And since you're vectoring the little chibi, enlarge her more but keep her in the same place, I think it'll look more effective! ^^

I'm not really liking the beveal and contour sort of feel, makes the wallpaper seem 'dead' Unless you have no idea on what I'm talking about XD It's just that bits of the wallpaper seem 'lifted' and it doesn't look good. I think you could add more to the background so it isn't too plain with the filtering. Maybe some sort of pattern on the background wall?? And since you're vectoring the little chibi, enlarge her more but keep her in the same place, I think it'll look more effective! ^^

Yes, I get what you mean. I didn't use any bevels or contours. I guess I should get rid of the black borders on my Vase and flower. I may of done it too big. My bad here.

Oh that's good ^^" You understood me XDD Hmmm since you've taken that 'black border' thing off, why not try adding some shadow to the bottom of the butterfly, the vase and all the other stuff that may need a shadow?? That way it'll look more real ^_______^ Good luck!

Thanks so much. Well I did happen to add a shadow and some transparency to the butterfly, flowers, and the vase. I may of done it too liightly. lol My bad again. I will get to it after I get done with my background.

Anyway great job on your recent wallpaper. I know I didn't comment it, but great job.

Oh okay here is the edited version of it. Please tell me what you think needs to be further changed:

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h142/Ryofusuki/AirWallpaperF2.jpg

I did a lot of things differently. I hope the character isn't too blurry. I totally redid it. I just added a lighting filter on the overall picture because I thought it was a bit too dark and the lighting was off balance.

Anyway, please tell me what you think. I would of posted it sooner, but I was too busy managing.