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Look at my bubblegum crisis tokyo2040 wall...
this is my first wall of bubblegum crisis...
just wanna know a feed back before submitting...
I vectored that scan and it seems I not really good at it yet...heheh..
well...just look around...the link below.
Bubblegum crisis tokyo 2040
this is my first wall of bubblegum crisis...
just wanna know a feed back before submitting...
I vectored that scan and it seems I not really good at it yet...heheh..
well...just look around...the link below.
Bubblegum crisis tokyo 2040
Uhmm.. well.. the bakground doesn't look really.. actually it looks pretty nicee.. but the font of the "Welcome to Cyborg world" won't work.. it just doesn't look right with the background.. and those bars on bottom left corner... it made the wallpaper look kinda weird.. coz it looks like you're selling this wallp. .. putting it there is not a great idea.. move those circles a little bit to the right.. ok.. about that vectored character... mmmmm.. you need to work on vectoring it.. the outlines are jaggy.. and the line that are supposed to be straight are really curvy.. the outlines are also too thick.. use a thinner brush for the outlines.. and try making the character bigger and tilt it a bit on the side..the color doesn't look good.. the colors are too bright compare to the background.. the background is black and white.. then you put a bright colored character on it.. it looks really weird.. use the black and white color.. just change the option on grayscale.. good luck!
Well...I really love that two color combination so...
I havent change it...maybe a little change here...
how about this
I havent change it...maybe a little change here...
how about this
Like the idea =] But the Bubblegum crisis bit is abit too pixelly for my taste... try smoothing it out a bit or maybe put bold in to see if it makes a different... its so pixel its kinda blurry x] Also the codebar thing is a bit big... try shortening it! If you like the effect of it maybe make it longer.. but not taller... cause it ruins the background! lotsa luck with that!
For the Bubblegum Crisis part it looks like you're using the silk screen font. When you use pixel-y fonts like that, you should set the anti aliasing method to 'none'. That way, it won't get blurry or crazy. :3
Ok.. the circles stuff on the background looks better on that place.. and the font is way better than the first one.. still.. those bars are just annoying.. can you pls remove it?? lol.. ok.. mmmmmm.. the left side looks empty now.. try putting some of those stuff that you put on the right side.. don't put too many though...
then about the scan... i still think that the colors are just too bright compare to the background.. and you really need to re-vector it.. coz the outlines are just messy.. and make the outline thinner.. coz the scan is small (fat outlines will look bad) make the scan BIGGER and make the outline THINNER than this recent one.. one last suggestion.. make the "WELCOME TO CYBORG WORLD" bigger.. coz the wallp looks abit empty.. good luck
then about the scan... i still think that the colors are just too bright compare to the background.. and you really need to re-vector it.. coz the outlines are just messy.. and make the outline thinner.. coz the scan is small (fat outlines will look bad) make the scan BIGGER and make the outline THINNER than this recent one.. one last suggestion.. make the "WELCOME TO CYBORG WORLD" bigger.. coz the wallp looks abit empty.. good luck
And yea.. change the color of the scan.. its too bright.. and it REALLY DOESNT blend with the background... thats my opinion.. if you want it like that.. oh well.. its your wallpaper after all.. good luck
Okey...I'll be changing a little there...hehe..
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