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Hope
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Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly.
~ Langston Hughes
Sorry, is there anything in particular about it you want us to comment about?
Speaking generally, I'm not too keen about there being so much text covering over the background.
Extraction wise, there are a few places that look like they could be cleaned up and blended into the background better - the light flecks around the top of her head, the chin/hair area and the soles of the shoes in particular.
Good luck.
Speaking generally, I'm not too keen about there being so much text covering over the background.
Extraction wise, there are a few places that look like they could be cleaned up and blended into the background better - the light flecks around the top of her head, the chin/hair area and the soles of the shoes in particular.
Good luck.
I pretty much agree with hamsters - brief comments are best on walls. Paragraphs are something really discouraged because the focus is the images - not words.
Her legs also seem a bit off. Maybe duplicate her & blur the bottom one a touch to help blend it in.
Her legs also seem a bit off. Maybe duplicate her & blur the bottom one a touch to help blend it in.
Sorry about that. Well, I kind of wanted comments on the whole thing, but now that you point it out, I should have specified. So I guess the main thing is if the background is okay? Is there too much text, or should I just lighten it a bit? I cleaned up the scan a bit.
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Lightened Text Version
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Lightened Text Version
Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly.
~ Langston Hughes
I think you should probably get rid of the text, because it's not very readable anyways and personally, i don't like text as bg
your sig is also hard to see,
the bg is too blurry, so clean that up a bit
C: nice start^^
your sig is also hard to see,
the bg is too blurry, so clean that up a bit
C: nice start^^
2 years 8 months ago
You might want to remove the black lines within the image. To me, it seems to take away from the background. Also, try and add a bit more of an effect on the 2 border lines. They're too dark and detract from the overall image.
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