My First Vector EVER!
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#503407 Quote Report Edited by ~knucklez09 2 years 10 months ago
Is it just me or do the lines look really thick? Everything looks really nice except for the lines...maybe try doing the outlines at the higher res, so when scaled back down, they look cleaner? But yeah, everything looks nice except for the outlines. Nice job with your first vector!
How a bout this 

aznxenocideis it just me or do the lines look really thick? Everything looks really nice except for the lines...maybe try doing the outlines at the higher res, so when scaled back down, they look cleaner? But yeah, everything looks nice except for the outlines. Nice job with your first vector!
#503427 Quote Report Edited by ~knucklez09 2 years 10 months ago
Sorta, yeah. but you see how crisp and sharp the outline around his eyebrows are, compared to, say, his jacket? If the entire outline could be as crisp as that, it'd be really good.
That was a really fast reply too...o.O
=P
That was a really fast reply too...o.O
=P
I see what you mean.......I'm workin on that now
aznxenocidesorta, yeah. but you see how crisp and sharp the outline around his eyebrows are, compared to, say, his jacket? If the entire outline could be as crisp as that, it'd be really good.
That was a really fast reply too...o.O
=P
As mentioned above, the outlines ar to thick. And not to be a idiot, but with the blur it really hurt my eyes.
So to be short: don't blur the outlines. Looking away from that it's a really good first vector.
~ed9e
So to be short: don't blur the outlines. Looking away from that it's a really good first vector.
~ed9e
Whats with the finger tips, those black spot on it, and the numchucks seem a bit blury (or does it have that shadow effect?), lines on the shirt isnt that clean (can see lines overlapping) either than that good job on your first vect ^^
Yeah I kno it looks bad. the first one was meant to be the final version but Im getting comments on making the lines thinner so I did just that but I dosent look so good. Give me some time to clean the new revision up some
Noein-DisgaeaWhats with the finger tips, those black spot on it, and the numchucks seem a bit blury (or does it have that shadow effect?), lines on the shirt isnt that clean (can see lines overlapping) either than that good job on your first vect ^^
Nice vector :D but in my screen it looks a little blurry or its jsut me... anyhow nice vector
I think you should take you should take away thr blur and glow and all the other effects you put in as well as the cleaning method.
Outside of that I think its a really nice first vector. I like your colors, even though that may only be because of the added contrast but none the less it still looks nice. Your lines look alort better after your first vector, you shuld keep your lines thin.
Good luck on your next vector
Nice job
Outside of that I think its a really nice first vector. I like your colors, even though that may only be because of the added contrast but none the less it still looks nice. Your lines look alort better after your first vector, you shuld keep your lines thin.
Good luck on your next vector
Nice job
Remove all the blurry effect that you added it is useless, then some lines of the lineart aren't bad connected so correct them, then remove theses black spots on his fingers
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