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Relaxation by °Tens 2 hours 23 minutes ago

Relaxation by °Tens 2 hours 23 minutes ago

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As an animation, Bakemonogatari has a simple, clean art style. But the guest illustrations for the series are anything but simple! So, it's great to see that °Tens took on a more complex illustration and made it his own with vector gradients so fine at points it more resembles painting that vectoring. Do have a look at this beautiful wallpaper!

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^hatesyou 2 minutes ago
So your slow computer compelled you to type in all caps and to call people stupid? Worst excuse ever.

~Loleta 6 minutes ago
Ack!! I-I'm sorry Lelouch-0, I actually didn't mean to. ....My computer is acting slower than usual.

~Lelouch-0 11 minutes ago
Ouchyyyy that was a bit harsh

~Loleta 16 minutes ago
ENOUGH OF THIS STUPIDITY!! (>_<)P

`Sakiera 36 minutes ago
Ra ra ah ah ah, ruhma ruhma ma, gaga ooh la la

~Lelouch-0 1 hour 20 minutes ago
WooosSh

~Loleta 1 hour 29 minutes ago
....................Watashi, Kirei? (Am I pretty?) ....Koredewa? (How about now?) *takes off surgical mask*......

$thewarangel 2 hours 23 minutes ago
Ha ha ha now I'n super anoying on the next level next ima grunt a strain for 15 whole minutes! until veins pop out and my my hair glows yellow like i was a part of some nuclear fall out

~Mysticmom2 2 hours 26 minutes ago
Oh no! Not Bankai!

$thewarangel 2 hours 33 minutes ago
BANKAI!!!

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Ok. My "wall"

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$blu00
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As a Person my Axel is Shakey.
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2 years 11 months ago
Well, I have very little time, so I gotta get through this fast.
Just post any suggestions and I'll read them later. Probably tomorrow.
Main points though are I need suggestions on where to put text, and the bg is kinda... i dunno.
can't put my finger on it.

This is my wall.

I'll put a more detailed description later too.
Just that it's new years eve, and I'm not exactly supposed to be on the computer... heh

So yea, happy new year and see you next year XD.
Thanks in advance!

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`swordfish-II
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long live the new flesh.
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Posts: 1439
2 years 11 months ago
Your scan is a little blurry it needs to be sharper and the BG and your character dont match the scan gives of a sketchy feel and the BG doesnt

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`Shikonxx
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ecchi sucks. :D
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Posts: 865
2 years 11 months ago
I agree with Jose, its bkurry. I also dont understand what snow has to do with her? Its a neat bg but try something other than snow flakes.. Hm shed look cool if you drew her in a boxing rink but thatd be hard >.< Actually the scan looks pixelated, I noticed it on the lines on her knees. Looks like you applies too much..median?

Quit crying your eyes out
Quit crying your eyes out, and baby come on
Isn't there something familiar about me?
The past is only the future with the lights on
Quit crying your eyes out, baby

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~Noein-Disgaea
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ノエイン　ヂスガエア
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Posts: 37
2 years 11 months ago
The Scan is a bit blurry, i guess fixing that would solve almost all of your wall problems, the BG is very nicely done so that you should keep .. good job on this one, and good luck

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~firemage
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Dare to be different, because when your simply you
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2 years 11 months ago
... i dont get the snow flakes....??

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Dare to be different...
because when you're simply you...
the flare in your eyes
can not compare to anyone else's...

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$blu00
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As a Person my Axel is Shakey.
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Posts: 158
2 years 11 months ago
Ok, so far I see that there's 3 things I should work on.
1) Blurry scan
2) Snowflakes
3) More "sketchy" feel

anything else?
I'll work on it and post my update when I'm done.

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