My new wallpaer

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Okay good job. But the background is WAY to simple. I like the idea.. But you have to fill it in with something. The sand looks like a cloud so you might want to make it look kind of tan... Also, she looks kind of yellow. (But okay) You should move the title up to the top in the Sky so you fill in that space a little more. You could also put little people in the water but that might make it to complicated so dont do that.. unless you really want to.

Where the water and the sand meet really make it look like a cloud so you should probably work on making it look like the water is just meeting the sand. The water to me looks like just little lines across the wallpaper... You should make it look a little bit more like waves.

Another thing. Her body is outlined in black and there is a little section that stops halfway up her arm, then starts again at her hand. You should outline that section in black too.

I dont really think the title fits this wallpaper. You should make it like "A Calm Day at the Beach" or something like that.

The yellow glare on her head doesnt belong. The sun isn't going to make that much of an impact on her hair so you can change that section of her hair back to black. If it doesnt look good then make it a little lighter shade of black or something along those lines.

A few last things. The font of your title and the font of your signature should be the same font. When you write the title over (If you decide to take my advice and move it to the top) then change the font to something peaceful. Then make the signature that same font. Dont make it too swirly or complicated because A) It wont look too good and B) You wont be able to read the signature.

One last thing! The next time you post a wallpaper dont just write my new wallpaper and give the link. Try to say what you like or dont like and ask what we think you should do with like the birds or the water or the sun. Things like that make it eaiser to help you and might give you more responses.

Good Luck!

Ok i 'am french and my english is too poor.
Sorry but i try next time to write more.

No problem. I hope you can understand what I wrote.

Si tu est francais, j'essais ecrir en francais... (mais ma francais, c'est horrible - j'espere que tu comprendera ce que j'ecrive :)).

Je crois que tu dois changer la couleur de la plage (<-- the color of the sand - don't know the right words, sorry) - peut-etre essayer le fair jeune ou orange. Aussi, tu dois changer la texture de l'eau, faire it un peu plus variee.

Mais, ton wallpaper est tres 'kawaii' (cute) :) Bon chance pour l'avenir!

(I'm really, really sorry for any mistakes I might have made... I wishi I paid more attention in French classes ^_^')

Wow, she looks wayy too tanned for that sand color, yeah just make it more rich and golden might be good,
just a litttle, and a sand texture is also optional
water should have different shades and more depth
probably be also a spot on the water that's brighter than the rest because of the sun's glare
but makesure that everything is really blended really well, ( not blurred)
you also might wanna move the boat forward a little so it's not right onthe horizon there
seagulls look kinda too real to me, bleh it's probably not a problem though, just maybe have a few bigger ones in the front, not that big though
less than twice the size of the one of the left right now will probably do
but the scan quality is very nice
just that a bit on her arm is a bit jagged , her arm on the most left side
oh, also, don't just end the towel like that, maybe you want to have some sand on the towel too, just a speck

don't forget your sig at the bottom left corner C:

Much better :)

I liked the last one better...
in terms of her size.. but everything else is better ( except for the sand)
her quailty is not half as good now,
don't enlarge her,
are you having trouble with the towel? because if you are i think the towel is a easy thing to draw in.
you can just color the same color as there and fill in the end, you don't even need to extend it or anything

last thing... the sand shouldn't be covering the water,...the water should cover the sand,
so right now it looks like the sand is over the water, try to fix that

ok, actually i change my mind,
besides the fact that her quality is bad, i do like the second one better
my desktop is more filled with her
if you can get the quality to work..then great!

C:

i still don't like how the sand is soo white