http://www.animeyume.org/userfiles/121448_A1BE959F35.jpg

im out of ideas to how i should make this better ... exept for making the "pointy sticks" a more water like condiotion...

any tought at all are welcome..

I don't see why you need to create a second thread for the same wall just 2 hours after the first one; it's not like the other thread has dropped several pages down and you can't find it anymore kind of thing. Besides, the wall hasn't been changed in the meantime. Just be a bit more patient and wait for the comments to come in.

Please see your first thread for my comments.

Minna-san, fyi the main thread is at http://www.animepaper.net/forums/Session-Zero/21231/