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Nana Wallpaper II
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Hies hies
ok I've posted this before but the topic was...clossed to disscution or some of that.
I know I forget to update.
so here is the firs (or original) wallpaper: http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/naoko_sen/Nanawallpaper-1.jpg
and the second (or improved) : http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/naoko_sen/nanawallpaper.png
The second is much better I think
but I'm not sure the shadow does.
I've changed the phrase too.
coments onegai...
ok I've posted this before but the topic was...clossed to disscution or some of that.
I know I forget to update.
so here is the firs (or original) wallpaper: http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/naoko_sen/Nanawallpaper-1.jpg
and the second (or improved) : http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/naoko_sen/nanawallpaper.png
The second is much better I think
but I'm not sure the shadow does.I've changed the phrase too.
coments onegai...
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I really liked the first one it just needs something else that i cant put my finger on...
I personally prefer the first one, the fading away effect is really appealing especially with the phrase which I found to be quite appropriate for this wallpaper good job =]
#682507 Quote Report Edited by ~Crimsonwill 9 months 2 weeks ago
The first one? wao I thought the second was muuch better 
I'll work with the first wally
so, what about the tex or the font? I'll repare it couse the ''Im just'' looks like...nothing >.> i think.
more coments? welcomeeee
I'll work with the first wally
so, what about the tex or the font? I'll repare it couse the ''Im just'' looks like...nothing >.> i think.
more coments? welcomeeee
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Well, work on the lighting on the font, casue it too bright and its blinds out some of the text. Also, the lower part of the scan has some wierd texture to it. Other than that, lookin' good! Keep up the good work!
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anyway, both look good, however the 2nd is better than the 1st. it has, basically, some concept. the 1st is just a scan stamped on BG with some glow around
and remove that davinci brush, it doesn't fit at all... (write something with a girl handwritting font)
one other thing, is the plants brush... there are ways to make them look better. try them out (they look crap the way they are) just experiment with PS ...
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anyway, both look good, however the 2nd is better than the 1st. it has, basically, some concept. the 1st is just a scan stamped on BG with some glow around
and remove that davinci brush, it doesn't fit at all... (write something with a girl handwritting font)
one other thing, is the plants brush... there are ways to make them look better. try them out (they look crap the way they are) just experiment with PS ...
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I think the second one is better but there is something that bothers me but i cannot figure out what is it, maybe the BG colors >"< sorry, cause i've never made wall in this style before, well, hope you can improve the wall ^0^
the first one look good to, but everything just so blend together that make it looks flat and little bit boring
the first one look good to, but everything just so blend together that make it looks flat and little bit boring
Hi...
Akyr:thnxs. yeah i know (that lighting kind-of-thing give me problems >>)
Danalm: I've waiting for that advice.
ok, first it all, whats the davinci brush? (and forgive my inexperience)
then I could do something with the plants, in the first time i was not sure about them >.>. and 'bout the font..will find one like. Thnxs!
Phill: yes, all too flat. I think so! thats the reazon 'cause I like the second one.
Akyr:thnxs. yeah i know (that lighting kind-of-thing give me problems >>)
Danalm: I've waiting for that advice.
ok, first it all, whats the davinci brush? (and forgive my inexperience)
then I could do something with the plants, in the first time i was not sure about them >.>. and 'bout the font..will find one like. Thnxs!
Phill: yes, all too flat. I think so! thats the reazon 'cause I like the second one.
#683469 Quote Report Edited by ~NAOKO-CHAN 9 months 2 weeks ago
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The second version is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay better than your first one. The background is more appealing. The details are very nice and the colours go well with the render. The "bad cutting" effect looks good, since it looks like a collage. I don't like much that parenthesis next to the text. If I were you, I would remove it. It takes away the focal and it looks awkward in my opinion.
Awesome entry. Good job
Awesome entry. Good job
Safety: thnxs! I removed that parenthesis.
now, this's the improved from the second wally
NANA WALLY i
as i said, I've removed that parenthesis, moved the image, changed the font, added somo flowers (adiction?), removed the plants too, and use two textures more and they're so nice that I just have to credit it this the link!
(none of the texs are mine or fonts)
lol now coment!
now, this's the improved from the second wally
NANA WALLY i
as i said, I've removed that parenthesis, moved the image, changed the font, added somo flowers (adiction?), removed the plants too, and use two textures more and they're so nice that I just have to credit it this the link!
(none of the texs are mine or fonts)
lol now coment!
This post has been filtered for improved legibility #683989 Quote Report Edited by ~NAOKO-CHAN 9 months 4 days ago
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9 months 1 week ago
I like them. I was a fan of Nana, although I hate the ending 
I like the walls, I think I prefer the first wall over the second, but both are really good. Wait. Now I've seen the updated version of the 2nd one 
Fantastic wall!! I want to download it right now lol. With the first one I just think it's too bright and maybe could use something else? Maybe more text like in the 2nd? No idea. Oh well, the 2nd is good enough :D Very nice work!
I like the walls, I think I prefer the first wall over the second, but both are really good. Wait. Now I've seen the updated version of the 2nd one Fantastic wall!! I want to download it right now lol. With the first one I just think it's too bright and maybe could use something else? Maybe more text like in the 2nd? No idea. Oh well, the 2nd is good enough :D Very nice work!
thanthire: wait!
taht wallpaper is not able to download yet. the reazon: I din't sing it , couse it is a work I don't finish, yet. sorry I hope you understan n.n oh, and thnxs for your coment!
the second one (improved) go wining??
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