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Urgent Comment needed
Okay, i'm panic now because i didn't mean to submit this one to the gallery, but then again i have an URGE to make this one through!. I make the bg plain white to make it looks uhh..'pure'.
I found the scan in the gallery and fall in love with it. But i can't think of any kind of bg that will fit except this white bg. What do you think? Please, i really want this one to be accepted.
Okay, here's what i got so far.
Tell me what's on your mind! :D
P.S: I know..it's a bit grainy..i'll get it to you later.
I found the scan in the gallery and fall in love with it. But i can't think of any kind of bg that will fit except this white bg. What do you think? Please, i really want this one to be accepted.
Okay, here's what i got so far.
Tell me what's on your mind! :D
P.S: I know..it's a bit grainy..i'll get it to you later.
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Okay. I must say that I like your wall so much.
Well, I just think that the written "And I'm forgotten away" should be a bit thicker or at least clearer.
But I don't find it as a problem.
I can't say if this wall is good enough to be submit or not ( I'm not a pro ),
but I personally think that it deserves a try.
Try to submit it if you feel confident with it.
Well, let's just wait for some other comments that maybe can help you better than me.
Wish you so much luck.
Regards, Yuki
Well, I just think that the written "And I'm forgotten away" should be a bit thicker or at least clearer.
But I don't find it as a problem.
I can't say if this wall is good enough to be submit or not ( I'm not a pro ),
but I personally think that it deserves a try.
Try to submit it if you feel confident with it.
Well, let's just wait for some other comments that maybe can help you better than me.
Wish you so much luck.
Regards, Yuki
I hate the cage, I like the sky, I am a bird, I love freedom... Let the wind flow...
There're no wrong decisions, there're only consequences of your choice
I like your wallpaper too , but you should change the size of this wallpaper , normally everyone will use 1024x768 or the other wallpaper size . ^^
I've checked the FAQ and it was one of the standard resolution :)
Anymore problems spotted?
Anymore problems spotted?
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Yeah, maybe i think you must remove that light effect in the leaf..
(In the most front leaf)
Bevause i see in this wall, maybe that light effect maybe it such a thing that falling down
And the "And I'm forgotten away", it's a little bit hard to read
(At the first time i read it "And I'm Torgotten Away _ _; )
Anyway, congratulations! You have been made another very good wallie!! >.<
(In the most front leaf)
Bevause i see in this wall, maybe that light effect maybe it such a thing that falling down
And the "And I'm forgotten away", it's a little bit hard to read
(At the first time i read it "And I'm Torgotten Away _ _; )
Anyway, congratulations! You have been made another very good wallie!! >.<
SPOILER (click to view)
#510898 Quote Report Edited by ~silmeria21 1 year 10 months ago
Well if you look at the wall CLOSER, silmeria, it's a 'F' not 'T'.
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The grainy effect is kinda nice. exclude the sciptina font. since you made a heavy staright font on the "when it's all fades away" compliment the following text with a much more natural look.
make the "y" to lowercase
grammar check! "when it's all fades away" ??? maybe "when it all fades away"
PM me if you managed to get this approved, i'll add thus to my favourite list!
good luck!
make the "y" to lowercase
grammar check! "when it's all fades away" ??? maybe "when it all fades away"
PM me if you managed to get this approved, i'll add thus to my favourite list!
good luck!
I like this wall very very much!!and in my opinion there's nothing missing...I like it like that!
Anybody could tell this one is ready to be submitted or not?
Because i'll submit it tomorrow if you don't have any complaints anymore.
Why tomorrow?
Because i can't upload anymore wall today. It's 2 /24 hours you know.. :p
Because i'll submit it tomorrow if you don't have any complaints anymore.
Why tomorrow?
Because i can't upload anymore wall today. It's 2 /24 hours you know.. :p
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Just like makotoken said, you should try and revise the grammar maybe...but I think it's ready for submission ^^
1 year 10 months ago
makotoken
grammar check! "when it's all fades away" ??? maybe "when it all fades away"
I agree... it's badly written...
about the leaves.. i think you should get rid of the glow.. cause it isn't blending well.. for example.. the leaves that are on top of his hair don't look good...
the wallpaper looks good.. the only thing that i wonder is where is he laying... on a bed... on the grass outside??... mm i think you haven't done enough work although the wallpaper looks nice..
kisses...
I like it but to me.... its to brighter... but actually i dont see anything wrong with it...
This post has been filtered for improved legibility #511194 Quote Report Edited by ~eria9 1 year 10 months ago
I like it, the white background is very appropriate.
HOWEVER,
the grammar of the text makes it un-submittable... its such a small thing and easy to change, please do as I would love to see this in the Gallery!
---------SUGGESTION------------------
"When it all fades awaY"
and I am long forgotten...
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The only other style point is I am not a big fan of the secondary text used (and I am long forgotten). However, that is just my opinion and will not affect its place in the Gallery.
Just change the wording I think you can submit it with confidence.
This looks really nice but this isn't ready to submit yet
you still need to fix some things
i think that the grains isn't a style that you put.. the scan was too grainy so you tried to clean it or blurr it or maybe you resized the scan.. the quality of the scan is bad.. it would really look better if the scan is really clean.. i went on your userpage and i saw the scan.. it looks really clean.. but i dont know if thats the real size of that image..
anywayss.. from looking at the wall, it doesnt look like that you really did work hard on this... (even if you, it doesnt really show on the wallpaper ) what you did was .. you used a white bcakground.. then place the scan there.. then use a very soft brush to erase some of its part and to give the glowing effect.. then you made the text.. and boomm.. theres your wallpaper..
I also noticed that you like using the scriptina font(idont remember the name).. its not really a cool font to use.. a lot of people hate it when people use that font for their wallpaper.. i would rather use the same font that you used for the "when its all......"
another suggestion for the text.. make the text thinner.. then put some glowing effect on it.. using color white..
good luck
you still need to fix some things
i think that the grains isn't a style that you put.. the scan was too grainy so you tried to clean it or blurr it or maybe you resized the scan.. the quality of the scan is bad.. it would really look better if the scan is really clean.. i went on your userpage and i saw the scan.. it looks really clean.. but i dont know if thats the real size of that image..
anywayss.. from looking at the wall, it doesnt look like that you really did work hard on this... (even if you, it doesnt really show on the wallpaper ) what you did was .. you used a white bcakground.. then place the scan there.. then use a very soft brush to erase some of its part and to give the glowing effect.. then you made the text.. and boomm.. theres your wallpaper..
I also noticed that you like using the scriptina font(idont remember the name).. its not really a cool font to use.. a lot of people hate it when people use that font for their wallpaper.. i would rather use the same font that you used for the "when its all......"
another suggestion for the text.. make the text thinner.. then put some glowing effect on it.. using color white..
good luck
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I agree with rath when it comes to the font..
the lower font, it think is much better if you put it on the middle
i think thats all i can say because they have said the other things
the lower font, it think is much better if you put it on the middle
i think thats all i can say because they have said the other things
