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Relaxation by °Tens  21 hours 23 minutes  ago

Relaxation by °Tens 21 hours 23 minutes ago

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As an animation, Bakemonogatari has a simple, clean art style. But the guest illustrations for the series are anything but simple! So, it's great to see that °Tens took on a more complex illustration and made it his own with vector gradients so fine at points it more resembles painting that vectoring. Do have a look at this beautiful wallpaper!

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~Inferi-Corvus 1 minute ago
*watches Lelouch fly to the moon* I suppose you guys are right.

~Lelouch-0 2 minutes ago
I wouls go with Loleta>

$Loftydreamer 3 minutes ago
*Punts Lelouch to the moon* Of course subjectivity rears its ugly head in this subject though.

~Loleta 4 minutes ago
An artist is one who can express their true feelings by binding those feeling into certain forms that descirbe who they are in the inside, and let their creativity out into reality.

$Loftydreamer 5 minutes ago
I feel there is a difference between craft and art. The concept arete comes to mind. Such as why you have artisans and artists.

~Inferi-Corvus 5 minutes ago
Hey Lelouch

~Lelouch-0 6 minutes ago
WoooSh

~Lekwid 6 minutes ago
The English language was no match for my superior llama brain

~lord-harime 7 minutes ago
I can not comment that someone knows

$Loftydreamer 10 minutes ago
No, you are a llama. We are still trying to figure out how you can type...

Angelic Serenade

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~drummergirlnay
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~Sephironoth
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3 years 2 months ago
The hair at the top is a litle cuted =\
The flower at her left has a litle white part at it, easy to fix
You could make that grass a litle better, or even take it out, put more flowers going down and make the bg better...improve those clouds

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~ReiRonie
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3 years 2 months ago
In general, the image and the bottom are well, but I believe that what fails, is the effect that you have put as of “grass” and the letter you could put it ^^U more down, and with the smoothest texture ^^ luck with it!

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~LadySaotome
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3 years 2 months ago
Firstly, she is very cute. And the overall concept it cute, too.

Now, down to business... ^_^

~ Her loop of hair up on top of her head is cute off. It needs to be repaired.

~ There is also some white showing by the loop of hair that needs extracting. I can't really comment on the rest of the extraction as the wall is overall so light that any extraction issues blend in.

~ She is very pale. You might want to look up some cleaning tutorials and brighten her up a bit. All the colors are very muted.

~ The grass is much too uniform & thin. There needs to be more & facing all sorts of directions. There's lots of tutorials on it. Frankly, I'd get rid of it altogether. If she's really standing in grass then it's so high it goes past her knees!

~ Placement. I'd say this is a good wall to apply the rule of thirds to. Scoot her over a bit so there's not so much empty space on the left. But don't center her.

~ The clouds are nice but there aren't enough. There's a lot of empty sky to the top of the wall. You may want to try scooting the clouds up so they aren't so low. Those kinds of big clouds are usually high up in the sky.

~ The text is nice but would probably do better bigger & with a touch of color. Also, because everything on the wall is so soft, it doesn't seem very "sunny". Maybe brighten things up. Add some sun rays or the sun itself. The shadows on her fall like the sun must be to the extreme left.

~ Lastly, maybe a tree or more blossoms blowing around rather than just having them centered around her.

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~aznxenocide
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3 years 2 months ago
The grass...it looks too clean cut, almost no texture. The bg...is it a photo of the sky? Cuz the stuff look too realistic for the stock...or maybe you're just really good at making clouds/sky. The stock is very very bright, and maybe if the text used a different font, it'd look nicer. The position of it needs a little bit of work too.

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