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Hachi wp
This is the original
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and then under some advices i have created the following versions
Striped Words:
With Sparkle:
Any suggestions on what else is to be done is welcome, i do like to keep it simple
Do you think the font fits?
....[edited] latest version is on second page
scan
http://img321.imageshack.us/img321/9493/nana17do.th.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
and then under some advices i have created the following versions
Striped Words:
With Sparkle:
Any suggestions on what else is to be done is welcome, i do like to keep it simple
Do you think the font fits?
....[edited] latest version is on second page
Not a fan of the stripes or the sparkles. The background is still kinda plain. Maybe that light pink from the upper left could be continued throughout the wall. In big bubbles or something.
It needs some fine tuning…
Try passing the free font in vector, it will make the lines nicer.
Adding more texture or elements to the background will make it more appealing.
Try passing the free font in vector, it will make the lines nicer.
Adding more texture or elements to the background will make it more appealing.
I'll try the bubble thing.
I men vector as in Illustrator, Freehand or Paths in Photoshop.
And I noticed the size problem.
And I noticed the size problem.
^_^ i like the one with the sparkles! ^_^ What font did you use 'cause i heart it (the big swirly one).
u can't really see the green lettering very well... maybe a diff hue would be neat and i agree with the possible continuing of pink bubbles... although plain and simplistic like it is has a certain nifty tone aswell^_^
but if you decide to make the background have more... stuf.. well since she is a fasion holic you may want to think about working in things that have to do with fasion.. like a tube of lipstick, a bottle of nailpolish... etc... maybe... just a thought ^_^
u can't really see the green lettering very well... maybe a diff hue would be neat and i agree with the possible continuing of pink bubbles... although plain and simplistic like it is has a certain nifty tone aswell^_^
but if you decide to make the background have more... stuf.. well since she is a fasion holic you may want to think about working in things that have to do with fasion.. like a tube of lipstick, a bottle of nailpolish... etc... maybe... just a thought ^_^
I was thinking of putting some Happy Berry logo on it,
how's that?
how's that?
Although you do say you like to keep things simple, AP usually doesn't XD But sometimes AP does XP But this type of background is too simple. Just a stripe background...you could put some more work into it. Maybe you could put some sort of decoration on the stripe wall? Maybe place a mirror or like a poster of herself on the wall? That'll make the background (and wallpaper) seem less spacious and simple ^.~ Hope that helps you, good luck~!
Oh..and can someone help me with the color of the text?
what should the color of the texts be?
should they be the same
or sort of like what i have now?
what should the color of the texts be?
should they be the same
or sort of like what i have now?
Ok,...finallly i'm done with the revisions...
so here are two made based on the striped wallpaper withwords^^
i've also added alot of different layers
and then, i figured, "i don't like the stripes anymore with the pattern because it's just too busy...so i made a totally new layer
and i've also changed some of the colors
the angelberry thing is not random, btw.
it's actually that Ai Yazawa has in alot of her mangas, it's part of her work, and that's why i chose it^^
Please give me all the help you can C:
so here are two made based on the striped wallpaper withwords^^
i've also added alot of different layers
and then, i figured, "i don't like the stripes anymore with the pattern because it's just too busy...so i made a totally new layer
and i've also changed some of the colors
the angelberry thing is not random, btw.
it's actually that Ai Yazawa has in alot of her mangas, it's part of her work, and that's why i chose it^^
Please give me all the help you can C:
2 years 6 months ago
Hmmm, now it's too busy and the pattern is too repetitive. maybe have her in a room, put a picture or mirror on the wall, maybe a table with a plant on it. you could use that pattern as the wallpaper, but i would only have it on the bottom half.
i still don't really see the point of that purple circle on the left. i'm thinking either play it up more or get rid of it. and the only other thing that bugs me is the neon green text, i think you should pick a more flattering shade of green. maybe make the white text a bit smaller as well?
it's getting there :)
i still don't really see the point of that purple circle on the left. i'm thinking either play it up more or get rid of it. and the only other thing that bugs me is the neon green text, i think you should pick a more flattering shade of green. maybe make the white text a bit smaller as well?
it's getting there :)
2 years 6 months ago
When I look at it, and the various versions you've made I get the impression you're just trying to fill space, tbh. I'm not a huge fan of raster lines like that, as I find they hurt my eyes, so maybe I'm swayed by that fact, but I would come up with a better bg.
What I woudl do is have a pink wall (as in brick wall :)), with maybe a patterned wallpaper on it, but something more abstract like lines or squiggles or hearts or something. I'd have maybe a rail across two thirds of the way down, below which was just pained pink, maybe. Then I would create one of those make-up desks with a mirror (she's applying lipstick with a compact). Or if I didn't fancy trying a mirror I'd try a bed, or possibly one of those large walk in cupboards. Or possibly a mirror with net curtains and light flooding in. Basically, I would put her in a bedroom.
Hope that gives you some ideas :).
What I woudl do is have a pink wall (as in brick wall :)), with maybe a patterned wallpaper on it, but something more abstract like lines or squiggles or hearts or something. I'd have maybe a rail across two thirds of the way down, below which was just pained pink, maybe. Then I would create one of those make-up desks with a mirror (she's applying lipstick with a compact). Or if I didn't fancy trying a mirror I'd try a bed, or possibly one of those large walk in cupboards. Or possibly a mirror with net curtains and light flooding in. Basically, I would put her in a bedroom.
Hope that gives you some ideas :).
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Alright, i'll definately try it out^^
thanks a lot
thanks a lot
HI,
after thinking about it for some time,
i've tried to look for stock photos and things that contain,
lamps, bed, mirrors,
i did find some, although they aren't too satisfying... i was afriad to blur of blend it much because it wouldn't fit with the sharp and clean wall right now so... this is what i have right now...
i'm gonna work on adding a dresser, mirror, and things like that
i've never done it before and well, i really don't know how it'd turn out
so basically, this is a wallpaper then a strip of (modified) happy berry logo, as a thing on to of rails on walls..and so..the yelllow stip is the rail thing, then below it is more wall..painted or wallpaper i guess
at first, i had it all the way down, which was what i preferred in oppose to this version, but then i didn't know how to put the mirror and maybe more to indicate that it's a bedroom, or should i just have a mirror and is that enough? i don't know anymore...
but the yellow gradient at the bottom is suposed to be carpet..i hope it looks somehow like it ^^
alright, all feedback is welcome^^
PS> i tried to draw a bed behind her..somehow i couldn't get the perspective right and i was also wondering how to draw straight lines in photoshop ~~ it may sound stupid XD
lol, now that i look at it, the rail thing looks a little too wide maybe
after thinking about it for some time,
i've tried to look for stock photos and things that contain,
lamps, bed, mirrors,
i did find some, although they aren't too satisfying... i was afriad to blur of blend it much because it wouldn't fit with the sharp and clean wall right now so... this is what i have right now...
i'm gonna work on adding a dresser, mirror, and things like that
i've never done it before and well, i really don't know how it'd turn out
so basically, this is a wallpaper then a strip of (modified) happy berry logo, as a thing on to of rails on walls..and so..the yelllow stip is the rail thing, then below it is more wall..painted or wallpaper i guess
at first, i had it all the way down, which was what i preferred in oppose to this version, but then i didn't know how to put the mirror and maybe more to indicate that it's a bedroom, or should i just have a mirror and is that enough? i don't know anymore...
but the yellow gradient at the bottom is suposed to be carpet..i hope it looks somehow like it ^^
alright, all feedback is welcome^^
PS> i tried to draw a bed behind her..somehow i couldn't get the perspective right and i was also wondering how to draw straight lines in photoshop ~~ it may sound stupid XD
lol, now that i look at it, the rail thing looks a little too wide maybe
I don't know how to draw straight lines either >_< so I’ll be looking for the answer to that too O_o….
Anyway I really like the fixes but looking at the wallpaper (in the wallpaper ^^) the top seems to heavy... usually a wall like that will have the paper with the bigger designs on the bottom and the smaller ones on top as a way of creating artificial space… just something to try and see how it looks ^_^
The texture does look like carpet and I think once you add some furniture in there it will become more apparent that it is carpet. ^_^ good luck ^_^
Anyway I really like the fixes but looking at the wallpaper (in the wallpaper ^^) the top seems to heavy... usually a wall like that will have the paper with the bigger designs on the bottom and the smaller ones on top as a way of creating artificial space… just something to try and see how it looks ^_^
The texture does look like carpet and I think once you add some furniture in there it will become more apparent that it is carpet. ^_^ good luck ^_^