FFX Wallpaper
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I've been working on this wallpaper for about 3 days now & I would like to say that it's finished, but there's something missing in it that makes me not want to submit it just yet. So, I'd like some help for some improvement or maybe additional things I can put in here.

Thanks for whomever can help me. ^^
EDIT - I took off all the background stuff and left it plain with just the picture frame and a regular background, so this is just scratch for now, I need advice for what I can add on to it or improve it.


Thanks for whomever can help me. ^^
EDIT - I took off all the background stuff and left it plain with just the picture frame and a regular background, so this is just scratch for now, I need advice for what I can add on to it or improve it.

The backgound is not too real, especially the window.
And some scan get blur
And some scan get blur
Very nice..i like the texture of the wall and the color there
the window part is a bit awkward
maybe the window frams are too ...hard?
maybe if you canmake it more popped out,
a bit of shadow underneath the bottom frame.
also the sea and sunset looks pretty but not very scenery like more like a painting sort
you should make your scans cleaner
the last sentence there on the memo doesn't make much sense
should it be,
"don't forget"?
also the space onthe left is empty,
but i was thinking maybe you can add a hot tea cup at the right with steam comingout?
as for the space on the left, maybe like a picture with a wooden frame hanging there
just not very big and not too much to the right
C: hope i was of help^^
the window part is a bit awkward
maybe the window frams are too ...hard?
maybe if you canmake it more popped out,
a bit of shadow underneath the bottom frame.
also the sea and sunset looks pretty but not very scenery like more like a painting sort
you should make your scans cleaner
the last sentence there on the memo doesn't make much sense
should it be,
"don't forget"?
also the space onthe left is empty,
but i was thinking maybe you can add a hot tea cup at the right with steam comingout?
as for the space on the left, maybe like a picture with a wooden frame hanging there
just not very big and not too much to the right
C: hope i was of help^^
Yeah, I also thought that the the whole background was too simple, and on the note, those words are songs that came from the OST, just to let you know. ;P
Everything is suppose to look sort of real, but maybe I should just change the entire thing because I have never worked on a project such as this.
I don't know how to create a window, nor a wall O.o so I looked up some stock images on stock.xchng and just put them there.
My first impression was that I was going to have Tidus in the background walking away from the so-called table thing. Unfortunately, I couldn't find any.
Thanks for the advice, I'll go to work on it.
Everything is suppose to look sort of real, but maybe I should just change the entire thing because I have never worked on a project such as this.
I don't know how to create a window, nor a wall O.o so I looked up some stock images on stock.xchng and just put them there.
My first impression was that I was going to have Tidus in the background walking away from the so-called table thing. Unfortunately, I couldn't find any.
Thanks for the advice, I'll go to work on it.
2 years 5 months ago
It's nicely done but the wall and the window and the stuff out the window aren't realistic enough. That's all you need to do otherwise it's very good
Yeah maybe instead of the ocean idea , find some stock photo on forest and take a small part of that and filter it somehow so that it looks real
you can take a look at my wall^^
i'm currently working on a nana wp, it's actually like my first real wallpaper but comment on it if you want
and, if it's from the OST then that's okay..sorry i've never seen this
maybe you can try the photo frame with photo on the left idea, maybe it'll work
i love the textures though
C: i think it can turn out great~
you can take a look at my wall^^
i'm currently working on a nana wp, it's actually like my first real wallpaper but comment on it if you want
and, if it's from the OST then that's okay..sorry i've never seen this
maybe you can try the photo frame with photo on the left idea, maybe it'll work
i love the textures though
C: i think it can turn out great~
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