anne's FIRST submission..o 3o
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3 months 1 week ago
Hiyahs..
Wallpaper here CLICK
UPDATED:
second wallpaper!..
i would really appreciate opinions on this first wall of mine, it's still being worked on but i'd like to know what can be improved..^^
I got almost all the brushes from; http://seishido.biz/brushy_free.html
and i used Photoshop 7.0 to make it. I've been using photoshop for quite a while now.
I got the image off google, i hope it's alright..o.o
Critique & feedback loved!
Wallpaper here CLICK
UPDATED:
second wallpaper!..
i would really appreciate opinions on this first wall of mine, it's still being worked on but i'd like to know what can be improved..^^
I got almost all the brushes from; http://seishido.biz/brushy_free.html
and i used Photoshop 7.0 to make it. I've been using photoshop for quite a while now.
I got the image off google, i hope it's alright..o.o
Critique & feedback loved!
Wowowow! The wallpaper looks really really nice and cute! lol! xD!!
I don't really have much to critique about this because everything just seems to fit perfectly! But what i would like to say is, I presume the circles are bubbles sooo... Would making the bubbles look abit more round make the wall look better? I'm not really sure but you could try and test that out and see how it would compliment the wall although i may have doubts that having a too round bubble may not blend in with the style of the wall. lol! xD!!
Anyway right now as it is, The wallpaper looks really good! Nice work on the wall anne!! Keep it up! and I hope to see better and constantly improved walls by you anne! xD!!
EDIT - Oh and one more thing i just knoticed. If a person were to set that as their wallpaper but not hide their taskbar, The taskbar would cover the Kanon text and it wouldn't look as nice lol sooo maybe you could do something about this? xD! lolol =)
I don't really have much to critique about this because everything just seems to fit perfectly! But what i would like to say is, I presume the circles are bubbles sooo... Would making the bubbles look abit more round make the wall look better? I'm not really sure but you could try and test that out and see how it would compliment the wall although i may have doubts that having a too round bubble may not blend in with the style of the wall. lol! xD!!
Anyway right now as it is, The wallpaper looks really good! Nice work on the wall anne!! Keep it up! and I hope to see better and constantly improved walls by you anne! xD!!
EDIT - Oh and one more thing i just knoticed. If a person were to set that as their wallpaper but not hide their taskbar, The taskbar would cover the Kanon text and it wouldn't look as nice lol sooo maybe you could do something about this? xD! lolol =)
3 months 1 week ago
Ahh i see...problem is, i can't make the bubble more rounder because it's a brush i used..xD and ahk, i'll move kanon up..^.^
thanks wilsonnn..xDD
Edit:
Uggh..if i edit this, it'll turn out REALLY different..xDD all the layers went and into one now..
thanks wilsonnn..xDD
Edit:
Uggh..if i edit this, it'll turn out REALLY different..xDD all the layers went and into one now..
3 months 1 week ago
This is one crazy hell of a first submission : D anne why are you so good at this? XD
3 months 1 week ago
O.o i am?..xDD
thank you?..x3
thank you?..x3
3 months 1 week ago
Yes you are
I think its cute wallpaper ^_^ i really like it ^.^
Lol! Rather than editted type Updated lol cause it makes it look like you added 2 wallpapers instead of 1, In the FAQs it says 1 wallpaper per topic in session zero i think if i remember correctly lol xD
And now to comment on your updated wallpaper... Well i think that its not as good as the first wallpaper simply because the the brushes were overused >< lol the brushes kinda take over and some of the brushes cover the character's face, The first wallpaper was more simple and doesn't distract you away from the character lol everything is about balance~ xD lol
I'd like others to please critique and comment on this wallpaper for further improvments(if needed) too please lol because i'm not really sure how could the wall be improved lol as i lack artistic talent~ xD lol!
Well Anne! Good luck once more! lol xD!
P.S - Oh and lol i'm sure you use photoshop soo... My suggestion is to not merge the layers together but to work using layers lol and backup your work occasionally lol incase some (ultra-mini-)catastrophic event happens to happen lol! xD!
And now to comment on your updated wallpaper... Well i think that its not as good as the first wallpaper simply because the the brushes were overused >< lol the brushes kinda take over and some of the brushes cover the character's face, The first wallpaper was more simple and doesn't distract you away from the character lol everything is about balance~ xD lol
I'd like others to please critique and comment on this wallpaper for further improvments(if needed) too please lol because i'm not really sure how could the wall be improved lol as i lack artistic talent~ xD lol!
Well Anne! Good luck once more! lol xD!
P.S - Oh and lol i'm sure you use photoshop soo... My suggestion is to not merge the layers together but to work using layers lol and backup your work occasionally lol incase some (ultra-mini-)catastrophic event happens to happen lol! xD!
3 months 1 week ago
Thanks Sabrea..^^
xD i see wilsoonnnn, thanks for telling me..
yea i just figured that out yesterday...xDD save everything as PSD before saving as jpeg...o-o
xD i see wilsoonnnn, thanks for telling me..
yea i just figured that out yesterday...xDD save everything as PSD before saving as jpeg...o-o
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