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Chrono Crusade wp
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I'm stuck with my Ultimate Weapon wallpaper so i decided to make a completly diffrent one
It is still in progress and only 4 houres old but i would like to hear what doesn't fit/adds/aso.
maybe i'll add some text like: every ones time will come/untill the end of time/when the time runs out etc. who know this anime is aware about these meanings ;]
some feedback would be nice ;)
It is still in progress and only 4 houres old but i would like to hear what doesn't fit/adds/aso.
maybe i'll add some text like: every ones time will come/untill the end of time/when the time runs out etc. who know this anime is aware about these meanings ;]
some feedback would be nice ;)
Alone in this world 
• I didn’t understand the message referring to time until I saw that the sun was actually a clock. I don’t know about making it a little bit darker? (It could look like nightfall instead of sunrise). And what’s with the lights in the tree?
• I remember a tree with those effects in Chrono Trigger maybe that’s why you putted those lights in the tree. Either way, you’re doing a nice job.
• I remember a tree with those effects in Chrono Trigger maybe that’s why you putted those lights in the tree. Either way, you’re doing a nice job.
We are the Earth Intruders...
With our feet thumbing,
With our feet marching,
Grinding the skeptics into the soil.
The characters seem to pop out of the bg, like they dont belong to it. Try softening their colors a little bit.
And the clock should be more obvious to the viewer. It will be a great element if highlighted more.
Otherwise it looks quite good to me.
Gambatte!
And the clock should be more obvious to the viewer. It will be a great element if highlighted more.
Otherwise it looks quite good to me.
Gambatte!
2 years 3 months ago
Well, in my opinion, it could be a good idea to darker the wall, mainly the characters, i think they're to bright. The trees look to bright to me if you consider that the sun is behind them and not in front of them, and i think the grass need more shadows or something like that.
don´t forget to put your sign and about add some text, maybe you could do a wallpaper with the text and other without it and look wich one looks better.
Hope i was useful.
don´t forget to put your sign and about add some text, maybe you could do a wallpaper with the text and other without it and look wich one looks better.
Hope i was useful.
All of those suggestions that people said before me sound very good, so I just wanted to let you know that I think the text 'until the end of time' sounds sweet and melancholy, so it's perfect! :)
First of all thanks for the good tipps. now the bg is darkend, the grass, the trees and characters too. I added some glow around the character cuz the sun shines from behind it should look like that (?) I also added a shadow of a tree...depends on how you think it looks like the other tree will get one too ;)
new or old tips'n tricks are welcome ^_^
new or old tips'n tricks are welcome ^_^
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Alone in this world
Hmmmmmm well i like it ^^
tho the chars are a lil lil grainy maby a small layer over em and a small smart blur tho if you leave it like this i think itl pass too couse its a rly nice wallpaper
tho the chars are a lil lil grainy maby a small layer over em and a small smart blur tho if you leave it like this i think itl pass too couse its a rly nice wallpaper
Spread your Wing, So Alone
(yeah i make wallpapers, AMV's and signatures ^^)
newest version with text
so whats better? with or without text??
Alone in this world
• It looks better with text. But you still have to make the character blend with the BG. They still look a little out of place. Try adding some shadows or lights to them
We are the Earth Intruders...
With our feet thumbing,
With our feet marching,
Grinding the skeptics into the soil.
Do these light integrate the chars more into the bg?
Alone in this world
2 years 3 months ago
I like the last version and the text, but i think seifer is right, there's still some work to do with the characters, and maybe they would look better if you try to add some little grass in front of them, i think that would make it look a little better and "realistic"? ...just a suggestion, good luck!
Now the scan looks too dull-colored. You should keep it as it was like in the first version. The scan also looks a little bad quality, so you should thnk about cleaning it.
The tree on the left looks out of place. I think it's better if it weren't there.
I'm not really a fan of those circle things you put around them two.
The tree on the right looks kinda like a blob, you should fix that unless it was meant to be like that.
The purple sparkles near the sun-clock aren't really needed either.
The glow around them two doesn't need to be there.
Good luck! :)
The tree on the left looks out of place. I think it's better if it weren't there.
I'm not really a fan of those circle things you put around them two.
The tree on the right looks kinda like a blob, you should fix that unless it was meant to be like that.
The purple sparkles near the sun-clock aren't really needed either.
The glow around them two doesn't need to be there.
Good luck! :)
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