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well, it's busy i know ;)
this is more like an evil version ^^
i like to know what you think about the bg, char and effects
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Cool bg. I like it can't wait til you submit it.
I'll only point out stuff I'm not so sure about. here goes. ow my head (not completely your fault--i'm a bit ill) yes busy @_@ too much to look at...and the text kinda fades in. i'm not so certain of the glowy stuff behind her and how it fits in as it is, because it's just this dense mass existing closely and only behind her back. if it's some kind of magical glowy stuff, then it needs to be more spread out and swirl about her maybe, more "evanescent". as well, because the transition from the pretty intense blue to the gray is kinda quick and mostly hidden by the scan, i found it surprising at first that one side had such a strong color characteristic while the other one is just...well, gray. a final note: don't forget your sig...unless i missed it in all that is going on in the bg. xP. good luck. ^^
Hhhmmm...not bad...well...all you need to do is clean up all the scan and background there...well good luck on that walll!
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The background is very busy. The idea behind it is nice, but there is so much there to look at that I end up looking more at the background then the character. The text gets lost, too. Also, to me it doesn't really look like she's standing on anything. She is kind of just floating there. The scan could use come cleaning, it's a bit pixelated in places.
Wow already so many replys ;)
well, I fixed some stuff but I'm not sure if it bette or not, f.e. the light behind her I added
resized the text, fixed some pixled parts on her but I couldn't see any parts until I tuned the gamma up.
then I saw the pixled black parts and I see thm only on highes grade of gamma so I let them stay. I don't think that people have such high gamma/brightness all the time ^^
anyways I'm gonna try some improvments here and there ;)
well, I fixed some stuff but I'm not sure if it bette or not, f.e. the light behind her I added
resized the text, fixed some pixled parts on her but I couldn't see any parts until I tuned the gamma up.
then I saw the pixled black parts and I see thm only on highes grade of gamma so I let them stay. I don't think that people have such high gamma/brightness all the time ^^
anyways I'm gonna try some improvments here and there ;)
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I like the updated one alot more, the bg is even more crazy >=)
looks very good... the only thing i can suggets (only small <_<) is the text looks very sharp on the background... maybe add a dropshadow or some effect to help it blend a little better - just have a go and see what it looks like ^_^
looks very good... the only thing i can suggets (only small <_<) is the text looks very sharp on the background... maybe add a dropshadow or some effect to help it blend a little better - just have a go and see what it looks like ^_^
I hope i get some comments about this update ;)
made lil bit here and there
well it's maybe even more busy then before but I don't think that the bg catchs the attantion for to long and the focus goes straight to the scan (or maybe not!? ;p )
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I'm not a big zomg luff fan of abstract bgs, I think they're overly distracting. Euhm... the font could still use some work. It's too grungy and distracting for this wall.
Ya..i agree..It's too grungy and distracting for this wall
I don't know if anyone pointed this out before, but the blue background and the gray-ish image don't really go that well together. You should try to either decrease the saturation of the background or overlay a blue gradient over the whole wallpaper [new layer > fill it with the gradient > set blending mode to 'color'] to make it look a littl bit more compact. Also, you could try maknig the text a bit smaller and placing it in one of the corners. That looks a lot neater.
Oh, and I don't think that the background is too busy. On the contrary, I like it! :)
Oh, and I don't think that the background is too busy. On the contrary, I like it! :)
well now it's completly diffrent and calmer then before as wallpaper I think it's better but as picture it' not ;)
font will be fixed soon when i got some sleep and maybe a diffrent symbol
what do you think? better with new bg?
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