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Doesn't come up when I click the thumbnail...
1 year 8 months ago
Wow! What a complex wall! o_O
I like the way you divide your wall... But I'm not a fan of the texture background the vertical lines... That doesn't look really nice...
The feathers are pretty much all the same but only with different colors and place... It's not even different shapes or size... Try to found some more brushes... And even the white ones are pretty bad looking :-s I guess they are made from the black ones and make a mask out of it then put some white... :-s
The scan is nice but it looks like you cut some parts in the hair and then you add all those sparkles to hide some extraction problems... But the extraction I see looks fine. Except on her feet... You have some white lines around her shoes.
The character is reflected in the water... But what about the sparkles in her back and around her head? Shouldn't it also be on the reflect? And the character has some colors on but the reflect doesn't ... Is that made in purpose?
This wall is pretty nice but some stuff you did are bugging me... It's hard to tell you what but I hope those little comments helped you! :)
Good luck!
I like the way you divide your wall... But I'm not a fan of the texture background the vertical lines... That doesn't look really nice...
The feathers are pretty much all the same but only with different colors and place... It's not even different shapes or size... Try to found some more brushes... And even the white ones are pretty bad looking :-s I guess they are made from the black ones and make a mask out of it then put some white... :-s
The scan is nice but it looks like you cut some parts in the hair and then you add all those sparkles to hide some extraction problems... But the extraction I see looks fine. Except on her feet... You have some white lines around her shoes.
The character is reflected in the water... But what about the sparkles in her back and around her head? Shouldn't it also be on the reflect? And the character has some colors on but the reflect doesn't ... Is that made in purpose?
This wall is pretty nice but some stuff you did are bugging me... It's hard to tell you what but I hope those little comments helped you! :)
Good luck!
First of all: this wallpaper has no physic laws ^^
I made some white sparkling behind her cuz she would fade in the background without a this contrast.
yea the feathers... first of all there are diffrent sizes ^^ ....the black one are the "original" ones and the white just the shadow...yea the shadow here is white so the white ones are the shadow in the "fog-water" but i agree I could have used some diffrent brushes...
the whole thing should just show some ?playing? between black and white. I did not care about the correct reflactions on purpose but it seems it is too bugging ;) thanks so far I'll take care of some of the probs :)
edit: small update

I made some white sparkling behind her cuz she would fade in the background without a this contrast.
yea the feathers... first of all there are diffrent sizes ^^ ....the black one are the "original" ones and the white just the shadow...yea the shadow here is white so the white ones are the shadow in the "fog-water" but i agree I could have used some diffrent brushes...
the whole thing should just show some ?playing? between black and white. I did not care about the correct reflactions on purpose but it seems it is too bugging ;) thanks so far I'll take care of some of the probs :)
edit: small update

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