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my abarai_Renji wall!!!
Hmmm...as you can see this wall...it's quite simple...nyaaaa...
well...this is only the result of playing the photoshop...I just want to know your comment about the playe i made and is it ready or it will be accepted...and I also need your suggestion about this wall...so i hope you'll help me...hehe..
here's the link...
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/6364/abarai3rx.jpg
well...this is only the result of playing the photoshop...I just want to know your comment about the playe i made and is it ready or it will be accepted...and I also need your suggestion about this wall...so i hope you'll help me...hehe..
here's the link...
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/6364/abarai3rx.jpg
+I Was Born Not To SOCIALIZE+
~ Rukawa11is a lieutenant of Soul Society Group
Hello!
Pretty nice wall, the scan wasn't that bad and composition is really quite good. The only problem I really have is that the text is to cluttered, I couldn't make out what is said right at first. Also the shapes and patterns in the green bg seems so pixellated, but perhaps that's what you had in mind.
Well, nice work anyway.
Pretty nice wall, the scan wasn't that bad and composition is really quite good. The only problem I really have is that the text is to cluttered, I couldn't make out what is said right at first. Also the shapes and patterns in the green bg seems so pixellated, but perhaps that's what you had in mind.
Well, nice work anyway.
Clueless Warrior
Yeah I agree with cluelesswarior, nice wall and etc. but I would download it for myself because of the text... make it smaler or more readable and smaler. And not in the center, but in the corner :)
Ow...i see...
well...just wait for the renewall of this wall...I better find some cool fonts first...hehe..
well...just wait for the renewall of this wall...I better find some cool fonts first...hehe..
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~ Rukawa11is a lieutenant of Soul Society Group
Sorry for the double post...here's the updated one...
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/6011/abarai11vf.jpg
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/6011/abarai11vf.jpg
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~ Rukawa11is a lieutenant of Soul Society Group
The text on the second one looks a lot better and so does the blue.
i know it's bad to use a filter on the main subject, but could you work the blue color into him a bit? to me he looks a little disconnected from the rest of the wall.
i know it's bad to use a filter on the main subject, but could you work the blue color into him a bit? to me he looks a little disconnected from the rest of the wall.
Extravtion of abarai needs work
(example: look at the top of his arm its too jagged)
you cannot read your text on the bottom right
the green bg doesnt work with this scan...maybe more of a red orange
anyway nice try but you need to touch it up to be accepted on here
(example: look at the top of his arm its too jagged)
you cannot read your text on the bottom right
the green bg doesnt work with this scan...maybe more of a red orange
anyway nice try but you need to touch it up to be accepted on here
Imagination is a state of mind
The update looks way better plus I guess try to move the text down a little on the place where is not so much texture to make it more readable ;)
Okey...I made some lil changes here...so...I hope you like it...and if ever you have any suggestion or you find any error...just feel free to write it...hehe..
saske1261993@yahoo.com
saske1261993@yahoo.com
+I Was Born Not To SOCIALIZE+
~ Rukawa11is a lieutenant of Soul Society Group
Sory for the double p[ost again...i put the wrong link...hhehehe...
here' the link...
http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/9413/abarai0dn.jpg
here' the link...
http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/9413/abarai0dn.jpg
+I Was Born Not To SOCIALIZE+
~ Rukawa11is a lieutenant of Soul Society Group
Thanks for the link. the red works great because it matches his hair - he fits the background much better now. when are you going to try submitting it? it looks ready to me...
Are you sure that this will be ready for the submission?
+I Was Born Not To SOCIALIZE+
~ Rukawa11is a lieutenant of Soul Society Group
Umm i think you should fix his right arm that is pulling the sword out b/c it looks jagged... but overall it looks real good!
NiCe~
NiCe~
Hmmm...okey...I'll fix it...
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~ Rukawa11is a lieutenant of Soul Society Group
2 years 4 months ago
Red is a nice color. I think its a nice wallpaper but maybe too many brushes...I dunno my opinion. You decide what you think is right. Just to tell you, they rejected tons of mine...so i think it might be rejected but i dunno