There is the wall...i need to improve...but i think i did pretty good drawing the room by myself and all XD

http://www.pagebarn.com/games/chibiluverz/hahaha.jpg

edit:and why do you have to scroll down so far?? is it something i did? or is it just me?

I think it's good, but the wall and some other things need texture. ^^ Good character

I love it! How did you get the bg for the image?

Wow...not bad at all...I think you should add sunshine to make it more serene! Besides that, you messed up a bit on the perspective on the walls. The windows seem like you're looking at it upwards, but the wall itself seems like you're looking at it downwards...hope that made sense XD. You're also missing shadow for the girl and missing perspective for the right wall. Another thing I noticed was your shadows on the right wall and the tree, isn't the shadow of the all supposed to be on top of the tree? You should also add some shadows of the wall on top of the girl. Other than that, great job!

The indoor perspective and the outdoor one are totally wrong, lol. Indoor you have a sort of "bird's eye" perspective that looks at the scene from a point of view that is above, then how come that it is possible to see a horizon line outside with one line of grass and even trees? From a perspective that looks from above you shouldn't be able to see the horizon line at all, in other words the outdoor area should show only the ground (seen from an above point of view, following the vanishing points) wihtout being able to see the sky at all, or just barely. Something tells me you have not used any perspective grid to do it because if you used it you would have realized it immediately ^^;. My suggestion is redo the whole bg again, first draw a grid with all the guiding lines and vanishing points, then according to the grid you build the all the background adapting to a correct perspective. if you are not experienced about that go this link: http://www2.evansville.edu/studiochalkboard/draw.html , it's a brief guide to how perspective works and how you should draw elements and objects according to it.

Anyway your idea is nice, but it definetely needs to be re-worked and redone in the correct way. ^^;

Thanks guys! ^_^ i'll TRY to fix it up my best

The perspective inside is ok, but as noted above, outside it's kinda borked. It just wouldn't look like that. Main thing is the grass, which would stretch away, rather than just be a thin line.

I think what I'd actually do is actually increase the size of the komugi chan element. Iow, if you chop the top and right side off by maybe 20% or so, and then extend the grass to fill in.

I must say I kinda like the feel of the wall. It's very spring-like somehow :).

I think the room looks too big for her. Yeah, maybe add some more light to it. Looks really nice though.