Hello
Since I am charmed with it naruto and you prop seamo eh created a wallpaper of the new ending of naruto

Good I say goodbye

sakura

It's lovely :) When are you uploading it?

That's a very creative background you have there, but I have a question where is your focal point?

I gather that it is suppost to be the person walking on the beach, but my focus was first drawn to the large text on the top right side of the wall. Perhaps reducing the text size or the opacity slightly would help to reduce the texts impact so that it doesn't dominate the wall quite as much.

Everything is well done, but your scan is low quality, so like the (FAQ) says

FAQ

It is assumed that everyone submitting to the wallpaper gallery has at least an intermediate knowledge or understanding of Photoshop, Paint Shop Pro, GIMP or equivalent. If you do not feel you have that much knowledge then please submit to Session zerofirst. Wallpapers that the staff decides do not meet their expectations in quality may be moved to session zero for further critiques from members to help make a wallpaper gallery ready.

so i suggest you to submit your wallpaper to the (session zero) so people can help you more..but as for me..you've to make your scan with high quality.. or at least take tutorials how to make vector...well maybe it'll be difficult for your first wallpaper..but Animepaper Gallery only accept (High Quality) .. but i really admire your work..with the background really creative for first wallpaper (good job) .. OK..if you want more help..let me know..and i'll do my best to help you ;)

For me looks that the used character is from a screenshot. Without vectoring, is not quite the best source, especially since characters should be the main attention.